(#) destinationdestroya 2012-06-10Oh my God, that was amazing. I think that was my favourite chapter yet, your writing was incredible! I'm really excited to see what happens next!
Author's responseReally? :D Aww, thank you! :'D So glad you liked it and thanks for reviewing!
(#) BleedingValentine 2012-06-10Oh wow! You're amazing. Just, simply, amazing. I hope this is updated soon, I hope Gerard's okay! Even if he is a dick! :'(
Author's responseThank you so very much! :'D You shall have to wait and see...
Thanks for reviewing! :D
(#) CatscanFlyy 2012-06-10Oh I hate you for leaving us there
You are a cruel mistress indeed.
There's something very poetic about the way you write and I find it so easy to slip into another world whilst reading this (and your other) story (/stories) but if I could just offer the tiniest bit of con crit?
The detail you put into your work is wonderful and the characters have such depth that I just want to reach out and hug them but I think sometimes (not so much, actually, in this chapter so this may be unfair for me to say) the descriptions could be shortened slightly.
That of course is only my opinion but you put so much work into these fictions that I felt the need to give as much back in a review
Once again this chapter was marvellous and I seriously can't wait for you to update again!
Author's responseMeeep, I'm sorry ><
Con-crit is great- and I actually totally agree with you about the description thing. I've tried to get it toned down a little in more recent chapters by balancing the descriptive bits out with less descriptive ones, but I probably don't always succeed...:L Is it improving a little in the last few chapters, d'you think?
Anyway, thanks very much- it's greatly appreciated and I'm glad you liked the chapter!
(#) aweirdtree 2012-06-10Eric - the guy who felt awkward and very out of place during every guitar lesson XD
sorry, just had to. but seriously, thank you! i love this fic more and more every time i read a chapter :3 just, gaaaaah, Frank you're so amazing! except, noooohooo, don't hurt Mikey DX it's not his fault, it's not.
mwah. just thank you and update when you can :3
(#) Coffeeaddict98 2012-06-10Awesome as always xD CatsCanFlyy does have a point though, your writing has a lot of power but that power can sometimes be lost in description(same thing happened in Lord of the Flies by William Golding). However I must applaud you for this chapter because your description was more concise and made your writing even better than usual. I love this story, the plot and the characters are so great! I'm as addicted to your stories as I am to coffee and that cliff-hanger is going to give me withdrawal symptoms, update when you can x
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