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Chapter Twenty Three
27 reviews'All the way to the music room, I feel as though there’s someone screaming along with the howling winter wind and rain, just a semi-tone too quiet for me to hear...'
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Trying To Escape The Inevitable
(#) destinationdestroya 2012-06-10
Oh my God, that was amazing. I think that was my favourite chapter yet, your writing was incredible! I'm really excited to see what happens next!Author's response
Really? :D Aww, thank you! :'D So glad you liked it and thanks for reviewing!Trying To Escape The Inevitable
(#) BleedingValentine 2012-06-10
Oh wow! You're amazing. Just, simply, amazing. I hope this is updated soon, I hope Gerard's okay! Even if he is a dick! :'(
BleedingValentine xxAuthor's response
Thank you so very much! :'D You shall have to wait and see...
xD
Thanks for reviewing! :DTrying To Escape The Inevitable
(#) CatscanFlyy 2012-06-10
Oh I hate you for leaving us there
You are a cruel mistress indeed.
There's something very poetic about the way you write and I find it so easy to slip into another world whilst reading this (and your other) story (/stories) but if I could just offer the tiniest bit of con crit?
The detail you put into your work is wonderful and the characters have such depth that I just want to reach out and hug them but I think sometimes (not so much, actually, in this chapter so this may be unfair for me to say) the descriptions could be shortened slightly.
That of course is only my opinion but you put so much work into these fictions that I felt the need to give as much back in a review
Once again this chapter was marvellous and I seriously can't wait for you to update again!Author's response
Meeep, I'm sorry ><
Con-crit is great- and I actually totally agree with you about the description thing. I've tried to get it toned down a little in more recent chapters by balancing the descriptive bits out with less descriptive ones, but I probably don't always succeed...:L Is it improving a little in the last few chapters, d'you think?
Anyway, thanks very much- it's greatly appreciated and I'm glad you liked the chapter!Trying To Escape The Inevitable
(#) MCRkilljoy 2012-06-10
DAMN YOU!! DAMN YOU AND YOUR FUCKING CLIFF HANGERS!! Please update!! Update soon!! We need these!! These are our drugs!!Author's response
Eeek, I'm sorry xD I'll update as soon as I can- thanks for reviewing!Trying To Escape The Inevitable
(#) GeorgiaMCRlover 2012-06-10
Omggggggggggg. I NEED to read the next chapter! I am in love with this story!
I love how Frank still cares so much for Gerard even though Gerard is really nasty to him.
EEEEEK. I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!! xD
Georgia xoTrying To Escape The Inevitable
(#) aweirdtree 2012-06-10
Eric - the guy who felt awkward and very out of place during every guitar lesson XD
sorry, just had to. but seriously, thank you! i love this fic more and more every time i read a chapter :3 just, gaaaaah, Frank you're so amazing! except, noooohooo, don't hurt Mikey DX it's not his fault, it's not.
mwah. just thank you and update when you can :3Trying To Escape The Inevitable
(#) Coffeeaddict98 2012-06-10
Awesome as always xD CatsCanFlyy does have a point though, your writing has a lot of power but that power can sometimes be lost in description(same thing happened in Lord of the Flies by William Golding). However I must applaud you for this chapter because your description was more concise and made your writing even better than usual. I love this story, the plot and the characters are so great! I'm as addicted to your stories as I am to coffee and that cliff-hanger is going to give me withdrawal symptoms, update when you can xTrying To Escape The Inevitable
(#) LydiaWay 2012-06-10
YOU POO I NEED GERARD TOO BUT I ALSO NEED THIS STORY!!! well done!:DxxxxxxTrying To Escape The Inevitable
(#) Didi81 2012-06-10
oh my dear god , I swear every thing you write is even better than the last thing , this is just amazing !! You are definitely my favourite fic author !! Please , please update this soon because damn you , that cliff hanger !!!!Trying To Escape The Inevitable
(#) Kaida_R 2012-06-10
FREAKING INCREDIBLE! As always! Seriously, this story... I cry every chapter! Your writing is that incredible, even better actually! PLEASE PUBLISH MORE ASAP!
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