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8 reviewsCronus has awaken the the only girl on earth who can control animals, the titans are sent to stop her only to discover its a trap Cronus captures on the teammates can they save them before its to late
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Atlanta IN TROBLE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(#) princessofoyownworld 2006-07-08
No speech marks. Very few periods... hard to read. Good plot though.Author's response
Yes, I will try to add some marksAtlanta IN TROBLE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(#) Justforstories 2006-07-09
Your story was fine. But a little punctuation would help us in reading. keep updating.Author's response
Just FINE ( Just Kidding ) Thank YouAtlanta IN TROBLE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(#) Randog 2006-07-12
you must have been on a huge high when you typed this chapterAuthor's response
Yes I Was EEEEEEEAtlanta IN TROBLE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(#) story_master 2006-08-05
hey thanx for the great review on my story. By the way your story is awsome too! Can you tell me how to add more than one chapter to a story cause i have no idea. keep on writing!:)Atlanta IN TROBLE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(#) greektitan 2006-10-24
very good.one thing..."""""""""
"JAY"Screamed a voice.
"what"?Asked Jay.
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