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• Bittersweet Bait

  (#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-07-10

  This was superb! There's nothing wrong with being jailbait! I must admit, the story sounds like some kind of ficlet, and I think it would make a great one so long as you write it. I trust that you'll turn 'peach' and 'stuffed zebra' into something adorable and amazing, as per usual.
  OXO

  Author's response

  Thanks! Unfortunately my Nan and Aunt see many things wrong with being jailbait. I'll try to get on the fics as soon as I can (probably do it tomorrow).
  
  Thank you very much for reviewing! :D

• Bittersweet Bait

  (#) KobraBlaze 2012-07-10

  This is just so awesome!!! Really! It amazes me how you can turn real life flings into beautiful lyrics like this. Really well done! I would love to see this be turned into a fic. That would be unreal as long as you write it as said by youcanstakemyheart. The fic about 'peach' and 'stuffed zebra' sounds interesting and I can't wait to read it. Glad you are back writing again! ;) You're so lucky you got to see Blink-182!!!

  Author's response

  Thank you very much! I wouldn't call them beautiful, but I am extremely glad you find them to be so. I think I'll definitely turn this into a fic, as with the other one that should be materializing soon.
  
  Blink were AMAZING!
  
  Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :D

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