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Chapter Two: Murder Was The Case The Interwebs Gave Me
4 reviewsSometimes you die inside. Sometimes you wish you could. Title from LeATHERMØUTH
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Just stop, please, don't ever stop.
(#) xXxILoveFrankIeroxXx 2012-07-29
yayayayay update:) This was AWESOME. I feel bad for Gerard.. and I'm having mixed emotions about Mikey.. I mean, he's pretty much dating his big brothers boyfriend, but wont let Frank dump Gerard to keep him from being upset. And I'm kind of mad at Frank for cheating on Gerard....... SO MUCH RUNNING THROUGH MY MIND DX
Anyway, Your spelling and grammar are good, the way you wrote this is perfect, and the story idea is amazing.. whats not to like??Author's response
Thank you :). Yeah Gerard is the 'victim' I guess. I feel for him. He's a good brother, with bad ways. Franks just a victim of love, they all are. That was the plan haha
Thanks again :) I'm glad you like itJust stop, please, don't ever stop.
(#) FrankAIero 2012-07-29
I'm not sure how I feel about this yet. I might need a few more chapters till I know. But the spelling, capitalization and grammar was near perfectAuthor's response
Well thanks for taking the time to read and reviewJust stop, please, don't ever stop.
(#) Datdatdat 2012-07-29
I'm so unsure about where this is going and I get the feeling you aren't quite sure where this is going either as much as just writing things to be shocking.Author's response
I know where I'm going and I'm certainly not just doing random shit to be shocking but thanks for your input
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