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Harry's time in Vegas
(#) Fallenchaosx 2012-08-01
Yay, another good chapter. I hope to see more soon. I especially loved the pie in darkseid's face from Harley. It's classic her. +1 from me.Harry's time in Vegas
(#) Jantos_kitsune 2012-08-02
Its nice and original, I just wish it had a more hangover feel to it. Love the fact he cleaned out the casino. So keep at it and I wait for more.Harry's time in Vegas
(#) Genericrandom5 2012-08-02
Yeaaaahhh no. This was a scene, not a chapter. If you put this together with what else you've already written and at least half of what you've implied has occurred, you might have a decent chapter one. The first time you got away with things because it looked like a prologue but now? Now you're just proving that you've got no real inclination to write a story, but rather to just vomit out crap. This is like looking at an unedited regurgitation of a barely half formed idea. Two thumbs down.Harry's time in Vegas
(#) Bronze 2016-03-10
Now if Harry being out from under the meddling old fools thumb didn't cause major heary problems for him then Lilly being alive could actually put him in his grave! And couldn't happen to a better thing!Harry's time in Vegas
(#) PGHammer21 2016-06-26
Yes; believe it or not, the pie WOULD work. Darkseid's Omega Beams are (like Kryptonian heat vision) eyesight-dependent - no eyesight, no Omega Beams. Sort of a SHAME there are no pies to be discovered in "Darkseid's War Factory" (8-character raid in DC Universe Online) - or could that be WHY there's a distinct lack of slapstick? Slapstick may SOUND stupid; however, if it works, it's not stupid - and blinding someone shooting at you isn't stupid - far from it.
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