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8. My fucking hero
19 reviews“YOU. DO. NOT. STAND. IN. THE. MIDDLE. OF. THE. FUCKING ROAD!”
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Our Lips Touch
(#) Coffeeaddict98 2012-08-09
You're an evil genius I swear. The title confused me cause I was like ? Frank's dead. Then just when I started to feel real sad I scroll down and there's an alternative ending. Let's just say I enjoyed the second one better than the first. AnyWAY I really like this story xAuthor's response
Mwaaahahahaha!...(Evil Laugh)
I'm sorry,(i'm giving you a Virtual hug)
Thank you for the review and i'm happy that you really like my story:)Our Lips Touch
(#) BleedingValentine 2012-08-09
DON'T EVER FUCKING DO THAT AGAIN. OMG.... I was just thinking.... WHAT?@?!??!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!?11111ONE1111!!!!
Yeah. I guess that sums up my reaction.
BleedingValentine xxAuthor's response
Smiles...Sorry, (i'm giving you a Virtual hug too). thanks for the review.Our Lips Touch
(#) Kaleidoscope_Eyes 2012-08-09
YOU FUCKER!! I WAS ABOUT TO CRY! I WAS LITERALLY LIKE "NOOOOO FRANKIE! D':"Author's response
SORRY PLZ FORGIVE ME!!!
as I’ve said before I make the story up as I go a long and I had two ideas and didn't know which one to use...so I used them both:)
(Virtual Hug coming you way)
Thanks for the review.Our Lips Touch
(#) RockMusic 2012-08-09
That was EVIL! You are soooo mean. How could you that to us? What sucks was... It was really good too and you put effort into it and... Why? Who would do something like that? You played with my heart. I forgive you... But NEVER AGAIN.
But yay, Franks alive. I knew you wouldn't do that to us. Plus it'd be really weird if a story called 'Our Lips Touch' ended on that note and the whole time they'd only kissed once (once right? I think before this chapter they'd only kissed that one day.. I don't remember). But awwww they kissed. Oh the amazing love that is Frerard.Author's response
I KNOW:) Muahahahaha!...OK i'm sorry plz forgive me I'll...Try to...never do it again. I'm giving everyone Virtual hugs and heres yours (HUGS).
yeah they only kissed was once...well twice now:) (so far).
thank you so much for the review.Our Lips Touch
(#) imakilljoywannabe 2012-08-09
OH MY FUCKING GOD YOU JUST SCARED THE SHIT OUT OF ME!!! I WAS LIKE "FRANKIEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!! NO WHY MUST YOU DIE" AND THEN BEING THE LITTLE FUCKER YOU ARE YOU TOLD ME FRANK WAS STILL ALIVE AND I WAS LIKE "WTF JUST HAPPENED ARSDXSFGSN;NBPITRFGJHBFNBJLKFGNIBHREPSCKJA[OHEFORIEHGFPENFV NFVDJOCMJDCHS???????!?!?!?!?!>>>>e?!"@!/1?!?!?!?!?!"
Ok so yeah quite obviously I was freaking out and cursing at the screen.....(good thing my parents aren't home).... BUUUUUUTTTTTTTT now that I've had my little rant I feel better. SOOOOOOOO you still get GEE and GUMMY BEARS!!!!! Hooray!!!! So yeah. Thanks for not letting him die :D ~hugs you~ And yay they kissed again! 'Tis perfect! :D Until next time!
Also how about getting Mr. Ray Toro and his fluffy fro next (if there's more which I'm kinda assuming there is)? Would you like that? You would also get whatever randomness is stuck in Ray's fro...that should be interesting. ;)Author's response
SORRY, ~evil smile~, but really 'I am sorry'. I didn't mean to scare the shit out of you...that much:)
It would have been funny to see you cursing at the screen, heeheehee.
WHOOP WHOOP OH YUM!!! GEE and GUMMY BEARS.
there is a swimming pool full of gummy bears and Gee and i are diving into it...(i love daydreaming:)
yay ~hugs you back~ i've been giving every1 hugs to say sorry for freaking them out.
Ohh Ray yes plz... i wonder what i'll find stuck in his fro...:) and yeah there is totally going to be more.
Thank you so much for the review they always give me such Motivation!!! :)Our Lips Touch
(#) fireandice0409 2012-08-09
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!! I started to tear up!!!! That was soooo mean (but funny nonetheles)Author's response
~HUGS~ and sorry, thank you for the review.Our Lips Touch
(#) RubyLuck 2012-08-09
You are soooo EVIL. It was really good though. Please please please update it soon.Author's response
Mwuhahaha! Mwaaahahahaha! Muahahahaha! Moowaaahhhaaahhhaaa!...ok i’m done:)
sorry, plz forgive me. thanks for the review and i'll try and update soon.
P.s. i'm giving you a Virtual hug right now...enjoy:)Our Lips Touch
(#) BulletproofNinja 2012-08-09
OH MY FUCKING GOD I HATE YOU!!!! Okay, maybe not I love you too much to hate you... :D I haven't even read the real story yet, I was in tears at the end of the first bit! You're so evil (But clever...)
... Well played, very clever of you XD
By the way, you're right, that would make a good alternate ending. :P
Okay, I'm off to read the real chapter now xoAuthor's response
i read that you hated me and i was like 'NO!!! I'M SORRY'. (i like that line 'i love you too much to hate you'...i might use that in the story...if your cool with that.)
I feel clever:)thank you for the review.
hope you enjoy the rest...Our Lips Touch
(#) BulletproofNinja 2012-08-09
I loved it!!!! Gerard SAVED him!!! WOO!!!!!!! *le party time*
That was so adorabubbles!!! Awesome, awesome!
Also, sorry about the comment above, I was very emotional XD
Update soon?
~BulletproofNinja xoAuthor's response
YAY party...
Thank you so much, yay you loved it.
don't worry about the comment above, i love knowing the effect my story has on people and the reviews let me know that i'm doing a good job.
I'll try and Update soon... oh by the way... heres a hug, ~HUGS~.Our Lips Touch
(#) MissFilthyDivineMCR 2012-08-10
You literally KILLED me with that beginning!! XD That was so messed up yet so good! I NEVER SAW IT COMING!! Hahaha! :P Eep, this is exciting!!! Update soon, it's too good! :))) Love, Sabrina XOXO ~Stay Beautiful, Keep It Ugly~Author's response
So... am i responding to a ghost? Because you said I ‘literally killed’ you. sorry about that by the way:) here have a hug Virtual ~Hugs~
Thank you very much, I'm so happy your finding the story to be exciting. I'll try and update soon:)
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