(#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-08-19JESUSFUCKINGCHRIST THIS IS WONDERFUL. THE BRENNYBEAR! OHMYGOD, MY FANGIRLINESS! THIS IS FANTABULOUS AND CAPSLOCK WORTHY!
Author's responseHAHA, THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!!! I AM VERY GLAD YOU FOUND THIS TO BE WORTHY OF THE ALMIGHTY CAPSLOCK!!!!
Seriously, thanks for taking the time to review! :D
(#) KilljoyOnFire 2012-08-19It's so amazingly well-written and cute and funny, yet still emotional. I burst into tears at the "ice cream can't kiss you back" part. And then I smiled and melted like the ice cream at the Brennybear part.
New favorite one-shot.
Author's responseThank you very much! I'm super relieved that you found it funny, as that's something I'm really trying to work into my writing at the moment.
Thanks for leaving such a nice review! :D
(#) snake56tongue 2012-09-02Oh, wow. Doll you're killing my heart right now. It's breaking from the amazing levels of adorableness in this story.
I love how relatable Ryan is in this (wait, what, who said that...) in how 'emo' he is after being dumped, how he gorges on ice cream.
And then, OHMYGOD THIS PART KILLED ME the bit where you're talking about 'motherly' Spencer! I love this so much cause I can imagine this being exactly how their relationship works.
And the "She smelled like McDonalds, everyone knows you prefer Burger King," and 'Brendon smelling like the air fresher in burger king' part OMG HONEY THAT WAS WONDERFUL.
AND BRENNY BEAR YES OMG GOOD.
I kinda-maybe agree with you saying how it's slightly rushed, like maybe you could extend it a little?
But other than that, I loved it and it's definitely going into my favourites :)
P.S thank you for all your wonderful reviews, I love you so much for sticking with me through all my horrible attempts at fics :)
Author's responseThank you very much! I was kinda going for relatable with this, so I'm glad that you think Ryan is with his 'emoness'.
This is also how I picture the Spencer-Ryan relationship being. I'd like to think that Spencer would be the kinda motherly one, making sure that Ryan wasn't getting himself into any trouble or being too miserable.
Haha, glad you got the whole 'Burger King' thing. Is it bad that I kinda think that's my favorite part of the fic?
It is definitely rushed towards the end and certainly does need extending/fixing. I might make it a two-shot in an attempt to make up for it.
Thank you very, very much for such a lovely and kind review!
P.S. You are very, very welcome. And they are not 'horrible attempts'; they are awesome stories.
Thanks again! :D
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