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13. I’m not gay
15 reviewsI flaped my mouth open and shut like some kind of hopless goldfish out of water. What an attractive look…not.
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Our Lips Touch
(#) RockMusic 2012-08-28
Holy fuck.
How many ways can I put fucking perfect?!
They're finally together. Hell to the yeah!
I wonder who dare interrupt Frerardy kissy kiss.
THEY, MUST, DIE!
You know that thing were people flap there arms around like a retarted bird while grinning like a noob.
Sometimes a either enormously girly or piggish squeal will come out....
Yeah, I did that quite a few times. You caused this.
Y U SO AMAZING? You're like someone took this GREAT author and AmazingPhil had this epic baby. You're that epic baby. Now this story is like...
An Epic babies even awesome, super epic baby.
Like you gave birth to a BOSS.
Ohmygoth...
Things just took quite a creepy turn. No more coffee, today, nope none for me. *le sighAuthor's response
hehehe I caused you to do the Retarted bird thing :D awsome!!! Thank you! wow i gave birth to a BOSS...sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet.
yeah things may have took a little bit of a creey turn but that's cool because i have my moments too.
thank you for the comment.
(i woke up and had a look to see if there was any comments and after i finished reading them i huged my blanket and then did the retared bird thing without meaning too. i even said out loud "shit, i just did the retarted bird thingy." then I had a giggel to myself over it:)Our Lips Touch
(#) imakilljoywannabe 2012-08-28
HALLELUJAH! PRAISE THE LORD OR WHOEVER'S UP THERE YOU UPDATED!!!
You made them get together. I officially want to find you and come to your house and give you a ginormous hug! (non-creepily of course)
I must know who interrupted! Who saw them? WHY WERE THEY THERE? IMPORTANT QUESTIONS! That I won't get an answer to...until the next chapter.... ~sigh~ now I'm saddened. BUT, I still LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE the chapter!
I can't wait for the next! I was actually doing the same retarted bird thing as RockMusic when I read this, I went all fangirly and everything! :D The part where you commented on 'MissFilthyDivineMCR' and her ghostliness (I seriously don't know how else to put that :/) was hilarious!
Hmmmmm character names..... How about: KC Thornton, Abby Fenser, Skye Darlon (a boy), or Carson Adser? Idk.
Oh god those were horrible names..... Especially the last names..... Okay NEVER EVER ask me to write last names for you I will fail epicly and we'll both be sad.... So just don't do it!
ANyways, thank you for your comment about my prison's freakiness. It warms my heart to know that another person thinks it's creepy :D
And, yes Frank will be treated very well now that we no longer have to hide that we have him! We can switch off having him every other week! Lots of coffee and skittles and other caffeine for Frankie! (Though maybe not too much....I don't want him to hurt himself with that lightsaber I promised you!) Which, by the way you have earned! I even made a special case that only opens with your fingerprint (which I totally have) so that Frankie can't hurt himself! (Hopefully)
For your next chapter I'll give you......um........damn I've given you so much I can't think of anything new.......How about all of Frank's dogs? I don't know what else to give you so....Give me ideas maybe?
Chapter 14, I'll be waiting for you. XOXOAuthor's response
~finished reading comment~ 'how the fuck did you get my finger print?'
ANNNNNNNNNNNNNYWAY...yay hugsXD I love hugs. (Creepy or non-creepy...still love all hugs)
You’ll find out who interrupted them soon in the next update.
Arr the 'retarted bird thing'...I love it. dead set every time I get a comment on my story I sometimes do the 'Retarted bird' and go all fan girl and smile like I was on drugs (Drugs, gimme drugs, gimme drugs, I don't need it But I'll sell what you got, take the cash and I'll keep it Eight legs to the wall, hit the gas, kill them all And we crawl and we crawl and we crawl, you be my detonator
Love, gimme love, gimme love, I don't need it But I'll take what I want from your heart and I'll keep It In a bag, in a box , put an X on the floor Gimme more, gimme more, gimme more, shut up and sing it with me!!!!!) sorry…good songXD
(My friends give me strange looks after I’ve finished reading comments and i just burst out laughing...They don't know i read and write Freareds, they wouldn't understand...that's why Frerards are my secret guilty pleasure, like eating chees cake in the cupped XD)
that's why i haven't told my real name :P but i thing one of my friend is on to me tho....or i could just be paranoid.
Yay FRANKIE!!! did you know i was eating skittles while writing parts of this chapter...(i can't look at skittles without thinking of Frankie)
yay Frankies dogs...but their his dogs, i couldn't take them away from him...how 'bout they come and stay for a week or two:)
ummm…I don’t know what I want…it’s like when people ask me what I want for my B’day…‘I don’t know’. Hey speaking of my B’day I’s coming up soon…like this Monday coming XD yay!
Hey do you ‘BOTDF’…AKA…‘blood on the dance floor’? how bout I get them next? Or maybe ‘The Used’ or…or…Umm I don’t know…hey what other bands do you like?
Well I better go now…THANK YOU for the comment, I can never get enough of them :) :) :) :D :D :D :D :D :D :D XD XD XD XD XD. Thanks again.XOXO.Our Lips Touch
(#) fx52mcr21 2012-08-28
O...m....g. I LOVEEE this story!!! Please update it soon.! :)Author's response
YaY thank you, it means a lot to me to hear that, i'll try and update soon:) thank you again for the comment.Our Lips Touch
(#) RubyLuck 2012-08-28
Oh My God Oh My God Oh My Fucking God....how do I put this nicely...ummmm.......YOU NEED TO FUCKING UPDATE RIGHT FUCKING NOW!!!!! Anyway I fucking love this story soooooo much, its soooooo gooooooood!!!! I like had a spasm when I saw you updated. :DAuthor's response
did you do the retarted bird thingy too??? XD thank you for the comment, I try and update soon:POur Lips Touch
(#) KilljoyOnFire 2012-08-28
I'm going to refresh my email nonstop until there's an update in my inbox.Author's response
Laughs out loud. I've done that before...so i'll try and update ASAP. thankyou for the comment.Our Lips Touch
(#) BulletproofNinja 2012-08-28
EARTWHYRSAGRTQJKERMGHT$QEGKHGM:KR$TI£T%GKQ$OTGQNK%NVKLAEFRKLGNW$%OJGKLNBKRWRKNBLKWNSKB Holy fuck.
You, madam, are a god.
I frickin' love this story so much, and you just intensified my love by adding sweet, sweet Frerard. Bitches love a bit of the gay.
WHO DARES INTERRUPT THE BEAUTIFUL LOVE THAT IS FRERARD!!!! Be right back, I'mma go kill them.
But wait- that means that it isn't a secret! Oh, holy potato shit's gonna go down.
I kinda hope it isnt Mikey, because he would flip his shit if he saw that. Ooh, that reminds me... WTF IS HID PROBLEM?!?! Y HE NO EMBRACE THE FRERARD?!
Anyhoo, I just wanted to say that you are an amazing writer and you can always make me smile with your writing (If it's happy...)
I hope you are well, and please FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT'S GRAVY UPDATE SOON!
~BulletproofNinja xoAuthor's response
~sitting in a group with my friend reading this comment~ it makes me laugh out loud and causes all my friends to look at me XD (they don't know about my life on FICWAD...shhhshhhshhh)
Awww your so sweet thank you for your kind words, they mean a lot to me:)
I'll try and up date soon. thank you again for the comment.
P.S. you make me smile too.Our Lips Touch
(#) MrsWayBeckett 2012-08-28
Gahhhh amazing!!
You finally updated! claps
I can't believe how fluffy/cute/hot/girlbonerrific this chapter was! :3
But they got caught...by who? Tell us!! TELL US YOU MOTHERFUCKER!! xD
Update soon please :DAuthor's response
your lucky i like the word motherfucker. I'll tell you who they got caught by....lean in really close to you computer or laptop (whatever you use)...a little closer...a little closer...so closes that you nose is touching the screen...are you alone?...If there is anyone around, tell them to leave for a moment... this is top secret stuff...onece thier gone (if they was anyone around) make sure everying i quiet...no music...no car alarms...No sound.
alright...now, if you want to know who caught Gee and Frankie making out, heres what you do...................................................................................................................................................................................wait........................................................................for..................................................................the............................................................next...............................................................................UPDATE.
:) just like everybody esle.
Thank you so much for the comment and the claps YAY! XDOur Lips Touch
(#) DaniAtaDisco 2012-08-28
KSHD buksdhfuklgiSHFKH HGUISHGSIudF AHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD LOVESAuthor's response
SWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET i'm so happy you love it. thank you for the comment.Our Lips Touch
(#) RockMusic 2012-08-29
When I read your response to my review, it was 5AM and I couldn't stop laughing. It was like the funniest thing in the world. Looking back, I now realize how important sleep is.Author's response
Yeah sleep is important...i haven't had sleep for nearly three nights.Our Lips Touch
(#) DaniAtaDisco 2012-08-29
anytime... I LOVED this chapter it left me speechless... which doesn't happen often... should I be concerned that I'm turning into this Frank of which you created? Because I'm always arguing with my inner voice of thoughts, I have staring matches with my shoelaces... I wish I had the guts to do what Vic does inner DaniAtaDisco thoughts what where pink shoes? No... to be proud of whom I be... and almost all the other things this Frank does (minus the falling in love with my best friend and the kissing and the almost getting hit by a blood thristy bus.) soooo should I be concerned?Author's response
Wow. i wouldn't be concerned, i think we all do those things:) I just so happy that you love my story:D thanks for the comment...again XD
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