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• First Fight

  (#) xXNickelChemicalXx 2012-09-04

  You know what.
  
  THIS WAS SUPER DUPER CUTE. :'3 :'D OMAOSDHFOIASGHFOASFHIA
  Okay
  Cuteness overload!

  Author's response

  HEHEHEHE Thanks!! I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing, You dont know how much it means to me!!

• First Fight

  (#) popskullture 2012-09-04

  This was lovely! Just one part that kind of threw me off was when Gerard said 'we usually don't let girls into our end of the year sleep over but I'll make an exception due to the lack of Frank this year.' The phrase seems too advanced for an 8 year old to say, but in all it was a great chapter:)

  Author's response

  Gahhh I know, I kept forgetting that they are little kids, i tried to keep it as simple as possible but... It didnt quite work.

• First Fight

  (#) Detonating_Bunny 2012-09-04

  c: that was just awww and a whole other awwws after that, is it bad i read the whole thing in a baby voice cx you know the one you use on liddo kids c: this might just be the most adorable story i've read in a while c: just ahhh c: anywhore, that was an adorable/beautiful/lovely/epic/awesome/everything nice of a chapter, story, everything c:

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