Categories > Original > Horror
(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-09-10Wow, I really like it. It's a talented beginning that definitely grabs at attention. My attention has been fully captured.
It says completed and I know it was your assignment but it would be really cool if you followed up on it. It's interesting already, and emotionally evoking. It would be interesting to see where it went, if you decided to take it somewhere.
Author's responseThank you very much! It's really good to know that it grabbed your attention, because I think that's what I really struggle with as a writer.
I did think about turning this into a fanfiction, but then I decided to keep it original and all ideas kinda evaporated. I do have a few ideas for it, but I think it will remain as a short one-shot for the foreseeable future.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :D
(#) CosmicZombie 2012-09-11That was...Wow. So simple, yet so evocative and powerful. So horribly yet beautifully real- your writing is just stunning, okay? You should be really proud of your talent.
If you decide to continue this, I'd be fascinated to read it, but it works equally well as a oneshot.
Yet another piece of brilliant fiction whose world you've created for me to escape to. Thank you so much for posting this.
Author's responseThank you very, very much! Seriously, your review has actually made my day!
I am kinda tempted to carry this on because I sort of want to see where it could possibly go, but at the moment I don't think I'll be adding to it anytime soon.
Thank you sooooo much for taking the time to leave such a nice review! :D
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