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Chapter 5
12 reviewsThe last thing I register before I black out is the faint sound of rushing water, and the two green orbs that have haunted me for six years flashing through my head one last time.
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I Shouldnt Love You
(#) tmbfucks 2012-09-23
Aw! This is so sad! I'm glad Frank and Gerard are decent with each other now. WHY CAN'T THEY JUST SEE HOW MUCH THEY LOVE EACH OTHER? This is an amazing chapter! I love it! Update soon! XD xxAuthor's response
Thank you ^-^I Shouldnt Love You
(#) Ravan-VanSlaughter 2012-09-23
Awwwwww, I feel so sorry for Gee now =(
Update soon please =)Author's response
I'll update as soon as I can :3I Shouldnt Love You
(#) BLEEDINontheFLOOR 2012-09-23
Oh my god. What just happened. I can't believe Gerard would try and kill himself, Frankie has to knock some sense into him. Update soon?Author's response
I'll update as soon as I can =]I Shouldnt Love You
(#) LydiaWay 2012-09-23
'I fuck about with it for a minute, holding my breath and listening to it slow, before hyperventilating to hear it speed up.'
HAHAHAHAHAHHAHA
and omg.
that was amaaaazzzing i was like :( then i was like D: which turned to Dx which then got to :P then :) then :') then :O then :C now :SAuthor's response
That review made me like ='DI Shouldnt Love You
(#) OhmyGee 2012-09-23
haha, room 254 is my English class room...good chapter.Author's response
Thanks :3I Shouldnt Love You
(#) PsychoticIsWhatsIn 2012-09-24
This chapter was amazing! I can really feel for Gerard about the doctors, and how they kind of lose respect when someone comes in for suicide.
-_- But I really, really like this story so far. You're a great writer!Author's response
Thank you =DI Shouldnt Love You
(#) mychemicalpony 2012-09-24
Ahhhhh this story is so great, it's like why can't they just like kiss or something (on Franks terms so he doesn't get freaked out) and then live happily ever after together. I'm not trying to steal any story plots you may have planned but ya know. And Patrick and Frank made up! AWWWWW :)Author's response
Hehehe... Soon, I promise =]I Shouldnt Love You
(#) frerardieroway 2012-09-24
Omg! I'm so hooked on this story right now! It's amazing!! It's so sad and happy and it's really well written! You're soooo talented! Please update soon! YOU MUST!!!Author's response
Thanks :')I Shouldnt Love You
(#) MaskedD 2012-09-26
I've been waiting 3 days.. I might die.. Just.. Next chapter.. Like.. Now.. Does it help if I say please... PleaseAuthor's response
Sorry for the wait :P..
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