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Our Lips Touch
(#) venomformybite 2012-10-13
I got out of bed to read this chapter (its only 9 here) it was worth it! :DAuthor's response
Awww i feel special now, you got out of your bed just to read this chapter (about Frankie getting out of bed...that a little ironic XD)
yay It's like 1am here, i'm glad you thought it was worth it XDXD
thank you for commenting.Our Lips Touch
(#) FrerardPopsicle 2012-10-13
I remember this story. It used to be good. Then things went downhill. Now im just bored.Author's response
oh, I'm sorry :( but thing will get more interesting I promise. Thanks for letting me know how you felt about the story, I'll try to improve.Our Lips Touch
(#) moonfrost 2012-10-13
I read this earlier in the day. I just came to check on your amazing fic and I see the rating is in the negatives. My first thoughts were FFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUU WHO WOULD DO THIS??? Nevertheless I went to rate it so yay! ^_^Author's response
Yay Thank you so much :3 I'm glad you still like the story :)
Thank you for commenting.Our Lips Touch
(#) jessloui 2012-10-13
I still love it.Author's response
aww thank you. but if it is getting boring just let me know.
Thank you for commenting.Our Lips Touch
(#) DaniAtaDisco 2012-10-13
Oh my god, I love this, I love you, you are amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Author's response
gosh your making me blush! XD Thank you! I feel happy again now.
Yay! Your pretty amazing yourself.
thank you so much for commenting.Our Lips Touch
(#) DaniAtaDisco 2012-10-13
YOU ARE WELCOME MY LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I AM SO GLAD WE ARE MARRIED FICWADDIAN STYLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Author's response
X3 yay there is no better style than ficwaddian style Whoop whoop XD
Lov Ya So Much!! thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... (now you have my going crazy with the exclamation marks :D) XD XD XD XD XD XDOur Lips Touch
(#) SeeYouInHellKid 2012-10-13
just stating: Stephen King is amazingly disturbing, i rock out like if i'm ther concerts as well (even the mosh pits...sad, one man mosh pits...), and i'm so fucking jealous of you for getting LOTMS set before me, seems lik everyone is :'(
ANYWAY!! I'll admit, this chapter does sound like a filler. I'm quite surprised how Cassie reacts cause when people are all affectionate i look curiously(like a creeper), register what's going on, apolgize for staring then leave them be.
You'd think after 15 years of exsistance i'd get use to seeing that but it's still somethin different i can't quite understand O-o
GAH!!! Rantings!! sorry, can't wait to see what's in stored for this story, Ferard, Cassie, Eric, blah, blah...Author's response
never leave me home alone with a stereo, MCR cds and a strobe light...XD
I had a strobe light in my room and i turned the stereo all the way up (my chem playing). I was jumping around, head banging and screaming out every line that I knew.
I ended up giving myself whiplash, hurt my throat and my heart was beating so hard I thought that maybe I was dying.
After I'd gone through two albums I collapsed on the ground, panting, sweating and shaking. My back against my door and just sat there trying to breath normal again. It was crazy and so much fucking fun XD
I couldn't move my neck properly for about a week and my voice sounded funny for a few days but it was totally worth it. One man mosh pits are the best, so much fun. (Yes I am a crazy little fucker) XD
I plain to get every single My chem related album I can get my hands on. I could just watch them all day (I never loved a band as much as My Chem.)
the reason why this chapter sounded like a filler was because it was! I have such big plains for this story but I'm just having some trouble reaching the point of action.
Cassie was just acting causally she's one of those people that don't really care what you do. she wasn't staring and she wasn't avoiding eye contact. (dose that make sense? I don't think it did but oh well.)
oh so much stuff is gonna happen but as i said it's a bit difficult for me at the moment to actually reach to point of action, I have to set things up so then it all makes sense at the end...XD if i keep going with the current idea I have now, there is going to a shocking surprise, but that won't be until far down the track XD
If it starts to get too boring or it sounds like shit let me know early so I can maybe go back and edit/rewrite it. just don't give up on me because I know I can write a great story and I really want you guys to enjoy it!
ANYWAY...Thank you for the comment.Our Lips Touch
(#) SeeYouInHellKid 2012-10-15
lol i once(two weeks ago) did this intense moshing where i rammed into the closet door, tripping me to make me fall on a pile of dirty clothes and locked me in. Of course when i went to bed i didn't know it but i got a few bruised ribs and some intense back pains. oh well, no gym for a week!!! :D
but that closet is seriously in for a war -.-
i might be the wrong person to critically review, if i don't like something i don't diss it, i just let it be(Beatles song!!)
i'll try though cause i'm taking your word for it that it'll get exciting and shocking twisty so we all have to be patient through fillers. I think all i can advise are interesting fillers and cleverly imputing those important info.
No pressure whatso ever, good luck!! x)Author's response
thank you, and i've been thinking about my story (while doing dishes, working, cleaning.) and it's starting to really come together in my head. It should be good if i can get the idea from my head to the laptop XD.
thank you for commenting.
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