- Where do I begin? First of all, I'm so glad you updated. It's been ages. I've had trouble trying to find decent stories. It's written so brilliantly. It just flows, your thoughts are so lucid. I love the way you write. I would go into technical detail but this story is just so much more than that. I feel butterflies in my stomach, goosebumps and my mood fluctuates along with the characters. It is so cleverly string together but the thing that hits me most is the emotions. The reader feels everything. In this particular chapter, you've used words so cleverly that I'm already dying for the next one. Each character has so much individuality and are perfect foils and contrasts to each other. They compliment each other so well. It's gripping, it's get realistic and so beautiful. I really don't know what else to say. I look up to you and am already eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Well done!
Author's responseYou reviews are always so kind, thank you so very much for this! While I do thoroughly enjoy writing, it's my readers that keep me going!
- Oh my god, you updated! Oh that makes me happy.
Well, as usual, this chapter was written so well. The way that fact lines up with fiction is done perfectly. How you reveal information bit by bit is really good, and I can't wait for it all to come together.
Bri's character is really relatable, and her flaws make her so realistic. But she hurts people and I just feel so bad for Gerard... yet, damn. That bit at the end with her and Josh made me feel bad and I just don't know how Bri's gonna get a happy ending.
So... um... please update again, as soon as possible!
Author's responseThank you so much. :)
Everything you say is true, but don't worry. I don't write anything or create any character without a very specific purpose.
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