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Unexpected Discoveries4 reviews
Crowley discovers something Aziraphale would rather keep secret.
(#) Sindeniirelle 2006-10-20rofl
I really wasn't expecting those last couple of lines there, really wasn't. Great fun.
(#) MarkPoa 2006-12-27Heh... quite fun... but the last "What?" seemed to be anticlimatic. I don't see Crowley reacting that way. If you're planning to revise this, maybe a more witty or pedantic reaction from Crowley be better. Like falling out of his chair or something. (...I'm kidding about that slapstick suggestion. :P) I'd imagine Crowley is more likely to have his eyes widen, be silent for moment and say "ah, I see... say no more, say no more..." like a bad Eric Idle impersonator.
(#) MarkPoa 2006-12-27Or alternatively, now that I think about it, ask Azizaraphale if he, by chance, took the condoms orally... but that's me being silly. :P
(#) Ithilwen 2007-03-29Ah, leaving his flat and all his beautiful houseplants...
Tense issue: "over two years earlier," not "ago."
"child, making Crowley smirk"
Oho, did he have a hand in it then?
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