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4 reviewsBefore I knew it I was on the ground he was on top of me unzipping my jeans. Reality came crashing into my senses and I placed my hand on his stopping him.
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Mistaken
(#) RockMusic 2012-10-28
The drama! The suspense! This story is everything a good book needs (so consider writing that book, yeah?). I love it, my heart flew away somewhere while reading that. Got overwhelmed with all the feels. Franks so brave, even though he's at the mistake center, he's still himself, showing them that they don't own him. Hunger games reference. Gerards imagination/flashback/dream type thing was so upsetting. Poor Gerard, hard life for no good reason. Lot of bad luck too.Author's response
aww thank you so much really. I don't know if this is book worthy but thanks none the less.I'm glad liked Gerard's flashblack, well you didn't like it, but you know what I mean. I felt like you all needed a better insight at what his life had been like so yea and that also kinda explained the akwardness they had earlier.thanks again for reviewing! :DMistaken
(#) Sam_Speaks 2012-10-29
I thought I would just drop by and let you know I almost peed my pants when I saw your reviews c: I'm quite the fan of this story, I just never seem to pipe myself up. I can't wait for more! I'm just so pulleD into this story, what's going to happen next?? O:
c: --SamAuthor's response
you like my story?! adsfghjkljl i love penpals so much! and i swear i only fangirled a little when I saw you reviewd. thank you so much and as for whats going to happen next im afriad i just can't reveal that quite yet ;DMistaken
(#) Truthchild8 2012-10-30
Whoever said this was a trainwreck was a retarded.
-.-
This story is great.
it is amazing
It is mother MCR f*cking great!!!!
- this is my very unintelligent review.
~Philosopher QueenMistaken
(#) Truthchild8 2012-10-30
Whoever said this was a trainwreck was a retarded.
-.-
This story is great.
it is amazing
It is mother MCR f*cking great!!!!
- this is my very unintelligent review.
~Philosopher QueenAuthor's response
lol well thank you very much I'm so glad you like it
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