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I Would Be Incredibly Pleased If Someone Would Have The Foresight To Notice Me Drowning And Come Help Me
2 reviews“I went to go get food, remember?” “Oh… Yeah, I remember.” He looked up at Frank guiltily. “I threw up in the sink.”
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A Man of Substance
(#) theflock7 2012-11-10
Wow!! That was so cute!! ^___^ I love the way you use similes, like you don't use them obviously (like you're trying to include them) but when you do put similes in it works sooo well! :) I don't think I can think of anything you can improve on, your writing is just so perfect!! I'm not just saying that, it really is!!!A Man of Substance
(#) BLEEDINontheFLOOR 2013-01-05
That was like a beautiful kissing scene omg -reads more-
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