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Messy Hair, Stained Makeup, And Wrinkled Clothes
10 reviewsFor Heartbreak_Beauty's competition
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Messy Hair, Stained Makeup, And Wrinkled Clothes
(#) Sam41 2012-11-17
Josh=Josh Ramsay?
SAM FUCK STOP BEING A DUMBASS AND FOCUS ON THE STORY
I knoooowwww, even though imma lose
You are not going to lose
yeah
Okay if you're not, I will, dude this is fucking amazinf! Amazeballs
mmmhmmmmmAuthor's response
No...sorry D:
KASSPER THANKS! :D
Sam, I doubt you'll lose. If anything, I'll lose!Messy Hair, Stained Makeup, And Wrinkled Clothes
(#) AshIsNotOnFire 2012-11-17
Nubcabcaukchaulhcuwhcukwbcukwbckuwbckuwbcugabcau how can I compare to this holy fuck imma lose I can't do this anymore shit I'm havin a breakdownAuthor's response
NO
You'll be awesome!
I bet your entry is gonna win something!
Perhaps first place! :D
Mine wasn't really good, and you can do better!Messy Hair, Stained Makeup, And Wrinkled Clothes
(#) Mirazal 2012-11-17
Why should anyone else even enter the competition anymore
AJ I'm gonna go cry in my room, holding a box of chocolate and listening to MCR okay
AJ why must you play with my emotions
Why AJ
WhyAuthor's response
Because they would probably win!
Okay. That sounds like fun, actually.
I don't know!
I don't like playing with emotions!
I just...
Just...
no.. D:Messy Hair, Stained Makeup, And Wrinkled Clothes
(#) AshIsNotOnFire 2012-11-17
SHUT THE FUCK UP AJ
THIS WAS AMAZING
MY SHIT WILL BE DEPRESSING AS SHIT
AND PROBABLY ATL
BECAUSE ALEX FUCKING GASKARTH, HELLO
I HAVE TO DO ITAuthor's response
SHUT THE FUCK UP ASH
MINE WAS ALSO DEPRESSING
AND IT DOESN'T MATTER IF IT'S ATL
SHUT THE FUCK UP AND WRITE AND WIN THIS SHIT
DO IT
ALSO, READ THIS: http://www.ficwad.com/story/205889
BECAUSE I WROTE IT ON FRIDAY ALL GIDDY AND SHIT ABOUT HOW MUCH YOU'D LOVE ITMessy Hair, Stained Makeup, And Wrinkled Clothes
(#) AshIsNotOnFire 2012-11-17
MINE'S GONNA BE AN OC ONE
VALERIE AND RIA
LESBIAN INCEST HELLOAuthor's response
LESBIAN INCEST IS ORIGINAL AS FUCK
YOU GOT THIS GURLMessy Hair, Stained Makeup, And Wrinkled Clothes
(#) AshIsNotOnFire 2012-11-17
JUST READ SATURDAY NIGHT
BABY I FUCKING LOVE YOU
DAMN
IM GONNA WRITE A BOBIFER IN THANKSAuthor's response
YOU READ SATURDAY NIGHT ON A SATURDAY NIGHT :D
I LOVE YOU,TOO
ARE YOU SERIOUS?
AWESOME! :DMessy Hair, Stained Makeup, And Wrinkled Clothes
(#) Sam41 2012-11-17
I will sit here awkwardly..cause I have nothing to thank for O.o AWKWARDDAuthor's response
It's okay!
You're my FicWaffle wife!
Nothing is awkward!Messy Hair, Stained Makeup, And Wrinkled Clothes
(#) Sam41 2012-11-17
Have you seen her? She's more akward than Mikey Way and an akward turtle combined!Author's response
I'm awkwarder than both and an awkward llama during lunch.
I sit on the edge of a table, while a clique of girls are giggling.Messy Hair, Stained Makeup, And Wrinkled Clothes
(#) Heartbreak_Beauty 2012-11-18
Grammar: 4
Plot: 4
Characters: 2 here because I can’t see Josh, and that was a big thing in the story. I see the women quite well, but not Josh. Please don’t hate me....
Knowledge: 4! Great job. I know a lotta people had issues for this! ^_^
ps: I NEED TO JUST COME ONTO YOUR REVEIWS WITH POPCORN GUYS THIS IS AMAZINGAuthor's response
I don't hate you! :D
Thanks :)Messy Hair, Stained Makeup, And Wrinkled Clothes
(#) KelseyChem 2012-11-20
This was kinda weird to read, solely because my dog's name is Delilah o-o
Anyways..
That was pretty good. Josh is a silly boy however. Gloria would not want him to kill himself just because she was gone.
Silly silly boy.
I liked it though c:Author's response
Haha I feel weird whenever someone's name is Phoebe because that's my dog's name.
Josh is a silly boy.
Thanks so much c:
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