(#) SpiritArcher 2006-07-31Again, excellent! Jack is like what he is, and the woman gives good answers to questions, and vise-versa. You don't have to worry about Jack's vocabulary, you're doing fine with him. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's responseThank you very much, it will be out by the end of the week! Thanks for your support, and I hope you continue to enjoy this story!
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