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• Eroninja

  (#) Vegito786 2013-03-27

  Another great chapter, I'm really looking forward to the next one. can't wait for Danzo to be dealt with :)

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  (#) Mrriddler 2013-03-27

  Really enjoy the subtle little intercharacter/intraharem conflicts you added, Kyuubi and Mikoto in this case. Nothing dramatic but a nice touch and shows the sort of things Naruto and his girls will have to overcome. Definitely adds a lot of depth.
  
  Now a few of the older experienced AKA less-innocent kunoichi have made their way into Naruto's group, the blood feuds they instigated or were part of could maybe show up even more prominently. For example, I imagine Koharu and Mikoto won't be seeing eye to eye any time soon. And there probably would be various peoples with chips on their shoulders over say Rin's actions etc. Lots of interesting things could happen and I'm show you've made plans for them already.
  
  My only thought/advice/opinion? would be to not to force resolutions if your plot doesn't call for it or require it. Eventually that will happen, of course, since that's the point of Naruto's dream, but I think you are getting a lot of good story time whenever you choose to inject some tension. Recent example is the "Suna-arc" involving Temari, Maki and Pakura which were a great read. It's good that it seems to be resolved, but had you chosen otherwise (i.e. Pakura wasn't forgiven and/or she chose not to let go of her anger... yet) that would have been fine too and we could have seen how the Suna girls interacted with each other and Naruto's plans.
  
  Great work once again and I look for subsequent chapters.

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  (#) Crimsonnaz 2013-03-28

  love it, cant wait for the next one :)

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  (#) Wilson3391 2013-03-28

  So glad to see the updates and finding the story again. I love what you are doing with the story and not making it easy for naruto after any conquest now. I am curious as to who Choumei will end up looking like but that i can wait for.
  Looking forward to the hopefully excellent Samui chapter if you have it planned man.
  Curious as to how Rin will affect the true leader of Akatsuki now thats shes with naruto and the team. Hope to see your next chapter soon, Wolf3391

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  (#) FicWader 2013-03-28

  eroninja is really the best lemon story with absolutely no competition. great work

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  (#) occijmp88 2013-03-28

  Hey great great fanfic one of my fav and the best Naruto fanfic I have read been following it since you posted chp 3 on ff.net keep up the good work you good sir have the right balance to keep the reader going

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  (#) TheWikedTruth 2013-03-29

  Great chapter, can't wait for more

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  (#) alec_potter 2013-03-29

  Great chapter once again. Can't wait for Naruto to take Kushina and Mikoto.

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  (#) DrGn36 2013-03-29

  Another great update. I wonder how will you use Rin for Naruto's ambition. Will she be a spy or be henged like Tsunade and Koharu so that she can still be in Konoha as a medic nin? Anyways I hope you continue being awesome and I hope you update soon.

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  (#) mkethepokemaster 2013-03-29

  love it and cant wait until next chapter . love the wayu your brought rin into the story and can't wait how you write kakashi reaction to rin return and is next chapter the last because the title is last days.

  Author's response

  No don't worry there are still plenty of chapters to go.

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