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- This is so goddamn good. Just saying, don't underestimate yourself because you're such a fantastic writer.
And damn, this is intense. Fucked up and beautiful.
I know I'm in no position to advise you but you should totally study. But either way I know you'll do great on your exams. c:
Okay. I love you. I say that I lot but yanno what even that's not enough I LOVE YOU, LAUREN.
Author's responseThank you, honey.
And it's all good! I got (almost) all of my EOC prep done, so maybe I won't fail algebra. xD
I love you too, Meerah.
(#) SyraStrange 2013-05-27Sometimes when the world's all quiet and these swirling, vemon thoughts scream so loud I swear I'm going to lose it, I think about people like this person in your poem and just. Stop. Not that stopping will ever change things like this from happening, but maybe I think that for every negative drop into that bowl of humanity, there are people like you who, instead of perhaps poking fun at tragedies and bad mouthing the dead, create words to acknowledge them, make it so they haven't left in vain. It makes me feel less worried everyone's not just an asshole. Thank you for writing this.
Author's responseyou've got a way with words, syra.
thank you for sharing them with me.
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