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Unfortunately Unbreakable
(#) Hoods 2013-04-13
This delightful little story is getting a positive rating as soon as my points refill. Interesting idea, gave me a few good laughs.Unfortunately Unbreakable
(#) LabRat 2013-04-18
Oh, Hermione definitely wants Harry to lay hands aggressively on her bare bottom.
So he really did spank her? Interesting. Though I have to agree, how did he talk her into it? And I must say, her comments on him not spanking so hard next lead me to believe that he really didn't have to do much talking into.
Hmm, I just realized something, as I was about to click the send button. Was Hermione breaking the fourth wall when she was discussing forshadowing and narrative patterns?Unfortunately Unbreakable
(#) DnG 2013-04-24
Just one point to touch on ... if Harry's name was put into the goblet under the pretense of being a Hogwarts champion, what is Cedric doing as a champion then?
Other than that, a delightful story to read so far.
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