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• It All Started With Clay S'mores.

  (#) midnight_star22 2013-05-27

  She's afraid of the dark, her mother's not home..is she a victim of abuse and/or neglect? She seems to have that perfection drive to go along with it..if that makes sense?

  Author's response

  This will come up in a later chapter. Trust me.
  
  Yes that makes sense. It didn't at first, but then I thought about it.
  
  This will probably come up in the next chapter, maybe not the whole explanation of the dark phobia/mom thing, but we will learn more.

• It All Started With Clay S'mores.

  (#) HatedEyes 2013-05-27

  This... is surprisingly good. Good job.

  Author's response

  Thank you!

• It All Started With Clay S'mores.

  (#) ArsenicAutumn 2013-05-27

  Aww, thanks for the mention.
  
  groans Toddler pictures are the worst! I swear parents keep them around only for embarrassing their child when they bring someone home.
  
  I am now very, very curious as to where the young lady's mother is. It's going to be interesting to see where all of this leads and how it will affect her burgeoning friendship with Gerard.

• It All Started With Clay S'mores.

  (#) HatedEyes 2013-05-27

  I'm actually quite eager for the next chapter, dammit. Update soon.

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