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The Overlord.
(#) insanecousinbenji 2013-06-03
This is getting interesting! I was a bit confused about the punk music in 1946 but then realised, hey, it's you au, you can do whatever the hell you want ^_^Author's response
Thanks! :3 I never said it was gonna be accurate, but punk music was probably around then. Idc tbh, it's just fun to write and put stuff in that time that isn't really there. It's like playing God.The Overlord.
(#) NotKissingYouGoodBye 2013-06-03
I really hadn't expected that! but i loved it! (and if we are going to get technical(insanecousinbenji) black skinny jeans probably weren't in style if they even had them back then, it's more of a 2000 thing Just saying) But yes we play God when we write so FTWWW!!!! X)
I Like it you know i do. But if i may speak openly to give my opinion?...(Gonna pretend you said yes) Great!
you need a bit more of a lead up into things, it just kinda feels like i'm in fast motion reading this. I love the idea and plot, you just need to slow it down a bit yeah? X) Like write a little more about how people are feeling, what their thinking. Describe things a little more. don't over kill it with the descriptions tho.
I mean the best and i'm sorry if i should have just shut up. I like this story and you have a great plot going on (As i have said) I just wanna see this rise to it's full potential.
I love ya! .xoxo. and i can't wait for the next update
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