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  (#) AmericanHorrorStory 2013-07-03

  Fuck. See that? That is the sound of a Claire with no other fucking words to say than 'fuck'. That.. that was fucking amazing. This is the quality of work I expect from someone as blatantly fucking bright as you. You're a smart girl.
  
  I would also like to announce I am almost 2 months clean, and will hopefully continue to work on that. I draw a lot, now. Mostly eyes, and closed eyes, and sometimes Dave Strider. But drawing nonetheless.
  
  A+, Ms. Hobbs. Truly, truly fucking brilliant.
  
  Keep the faith,
  xoclaire

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  (#) AmericanHorrorStory 2013-07-03

  And I have pretty tough standards - this is definitely something.

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  (#) AmericanHorrorStory 2013-07-03

  The only thing I could think of changing is where you've said 'it will be triggering', maybe change that to 'may be triggering'? Like, it just sounds better, ya dig?

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  (#) Poppana 2013-07-03

  This is really well written, and absolutely beautiful in an extremely morbid way. Makes me a little bit worried about you, to be completely honest.
  Anyway, this is a brilliant piece, keep doing what you're doing.

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