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Reunion
Naruto is given a scroll containing the secrets of making women fall for him, a scroll he uses at first on the women around him but soon on the shinobi world as a whole, giving birth to the Ero-ninja.
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Eroninja
(#) Crimsonnaz 2013-07-18
damn i didnt expect a chapter this fast.
You totally surprized me with the freeing of the biju i didnt expect that.
Please update soon :DEroninja
(#) chrishm 2013-07-18
okay what happened to nel? and why is saiken feeling (and looking) like that? Mira is anything but flat or short, the only explanation I cna think of is that you chose kid mira instead of 19 year old mira, which still ahs the attitude but she filled out the goth look really good.Eroninja
(#) HeGotGame 2013-07-18
Great chapter. It was quite the surprise to see an update in such short order. Thanks for that.
Naruto's brief conversation with the pretentious daimyo was interesting, particularly his thoughts on the matter, namely, the perception that rather than an equal partnership between a Kage and the Daimyo, it is a subservient one between the two. I liked how Naruto, thanks to this, came to realize the necessity of extending his reach to the capital in addition to his considerable clout within the Shinobi villages.
I gotta say, the choices you made with respect to the avatars the Bijuus now inhabit were pretty damn good. I think they are all good fits, particularly Rangiku for Shukaku and Nel for Isobu. Also, the fact that Kokuo sacrificed some of its power to give you the opportunity to not only include Tier, but also her three subordinates, was splendid. And the 'Bijuu tamer' line was good for a laugh.
Naruto's interference of Tobi's play for the Rinnegan played out how many of us (or at least, I) would have envisioned it (heroic hiraishin entrance), but it was still nice to see. The significance of their thwarting his plans (for the most part) is huge. What does Tobi have going for him? He's lost the Gedo Mazo, now that Sage has synched with the statue, as well as the bijuu it once housed, Naruto fucked up both him and Sasuke, and the work he's spent decades on is all but ruined.
I've already voted on the poll you've posted on your profile @ fanfiction.net, and I recalled how someone posted on your DeviantArt page that Katsuyu (is that intechangable with Katsuya?) should have some sort of connection with Saiken when they adopt their new forms, which I found myself in agreement. So, seeing as how Saiken is now Mirajane Strauss, one could infer that I would vote for Lisanna Strauss to be the new Katsuyu. My other two votes, though, I'll keep to myself for now.
Once again, thanks for the quick update. I, for one, can't wait to see next chapter. Keep up the great work.Eroninja
(#) turtlemaster16 2013-07-18
Very good choices for for the 1 3 4 5 6 tails I can't think of anyones else who could the 3 and 4 tails. Oh and please don't forget about Soifon.Eroninja
(#) pokemaster12 2013-07-19
Another incredible chapter. You really do have a knack for writing this story.
I don't have any real complaints about this chapter. It was good, and I can see the effort you put into it. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, which looks like it will have Naruto talking to Son Goku, which I can only imagine how funny that would be.
I'll take a look at the poll and give a vote.
I hope the next chapter comes out soon.Eroninja
(#) BlackRevenant 2013-07-19
Man don't even have to say much cause everyone else kinda touched on anything I wanted to say.
Just reviewing to show my support and give you back that ungodly review count.
RevEroninja
(#) Mastercappy 2013-07-19
I have to say I did not see that as the reunion for the chapter. But that is what makes this story so great. Love how all the new tail beasts are coming out. It will make for great plot in new chapters. I must say I can't wait to see what happens with the new and old 8 tails. Will it be like the Naruko arc where the new see itself as a cheap copy and the old one does not like I thinking it will try to take its place? Just love this stuff.
But I do hope that just because the options for the poll for the new is up does not mean that the losers will not make it to the story. Because some of the options I would love to see make the in as so thing else like kin maybe. What ever works!
But still love the update and hope for a new one soon! Great work!
Eroninja
(#) Tutenstein 2013-07-19
When will Naruto and Anko make up? Things seems to awkward between them.
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