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Reunion
Naruto is given a scroll containing the secrets of making women fall for him, a scroll he uses at first on the women around him but soon on the shinobi world as a whole, giving birth to the Ero-ninja.
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Eroninja
(#) Dragonlord27 2013-07-20
Thanks for that list at the bottom of who looks like who I was starting to lose track. Seeing Katsuya in the poll for getting a new body was a bit of a shock but I'm not going to object. It might be a good Idea for Kiyomi to start working on a new means of immortality.Eroninja
(#) Real-Steel-Kouryuo 2013-07-20
Gotta say, considering all the Bleach women characters making their appearance in this chapter, probably should have titled 'Reunion: Bleach Style". I know not all of the woman characters are from Bleach that you used, just saying considering they kind of dominated the cast. I like how you added in those three woman that follow the lead of Teir Halibel and how you added Teir herself in such a way, Also, how you managed to have Nel enter into the mix two, especially keep her unique situation from Bleach and carry it over to this story, definitely an interesting read. I have thoroughly enjoyed how this story has evolved ever since I started reading it. I like the little twists and surprises you throw in from time to time. Also, I do agree with the idea of what you used to explain how it was more the just possible for a new eight-tails to be created and it does address the fact of how Killer Bee can stay as such as well as how the eight-tails stays where he's currently at.
Overall, I don't think I can express how well you've written this story up to this point. Almost makes me sad when the day comes you finally finish but until then, this journey is one hell of a ride.Eroninja
(#) Joki-Boi 2013-07-23
Wow, just like always, your chapter is great.
I've been reading your story for over a year and a half now, and I must say that this is the best "lemon" story that I have ever read. It's not just sex, it's a well-developed plot interwoven with sex.
I was wondering "How long is this story going to last?" because it's getting close to the one million word mark. And then I see that there's going to be an Eroninja II. AWESOME!
I was wondering when you were going to give the remaining Bijuu their forms, and then in one fell swoop Kiyomi and gang jump in at Tobi and take it away.
While unlikely, I would find it incredible if you had Naruto take one of Nagato's Rinnegans in one eye while Shisui's Sharingan is in the other. That'd be cool. Though I could perfectly understand if that doesn't happen.
I personally think that Katsuyu's new form should be Lisanna because it would have a connection to Saiken who is Mirajane.
I had an inkling as to who Saiken was with the white hair but I had no clue that Son Goku turned into Kukaku until the end of the chapter. I'm assuming that Goku has both arms.
I knew who Kokuo was the moment you put the part about there being three bodies and Kokuo turning into a shark. It just clicked.
I'm wondering if, in the case that Erza is brought in as a character, she and Saiken will behave much like their canon counterparts do. I'm assuming that Saiken is going to be like demon!Mirajane before mellowing, if she mellows at all.
And if you do bring in Erza, I'm wondering if you're going to bring in Knightwalker as well. Hmm. Well, I guess I'm just going to have to wait and see. It's been one helluva journey so far, it'll be sad when it eventually ends. But all good things...
Keep up the great work.Eroninja
(#) Bsuing 2013-07-26
You've ruined naruto fanfiction for me! Do you know what you've done? I can no longer read any other naruto fic because your fic is so damn good.
The comparison in regards to other fics quality is set so high now, that i cant even bother with the other crap on fanfic.net anymore. They lack the eroninja charm.
You have it all in your fic. All the naruto/female characters that i could possibility look up? Why bother? Eroninja has them all. You have all the pairings possible, done better, than any stand alone fic with a female lead that i have read so far. Ino? No problem, hinata? No problem. Sakura? No problem. Ino/hinata/sakura? Psssh. Got that in spades!
My only concern with this fic is that you burn yourself out producing this type of quality at such a rapid pace. Dont get me wrong, im always looking foward to the next chapter.
However, Authors that take a month producing a quater of your quality, you do in 2 weeks time.
Please dont burn yourself out.
I do not know what else to say about your fic other than keep up the great work. You have truly crafted a fic that to me, is the best naruto fic ever.
There is no comparison.
Thank you for your endless dedication and committment to this fic.Eroninja
(#) RjtheDestr0yer 2013-07-29
I cant believe I completely forgot I hadnt reviewed this chapter yet!
I was really surprised when you decided to unleash all the Bijuu in one go but it works out and makes the story better because it wont have Naruto go after each Bijuu as a seduction target, something similiar to what happened Mabui, instead have the Bijuu develop chemistry with him.
What you did with the Eight-Tails situation was brilliant. I always thought the Gyuki was a little bit more masculine and is too close to Bee to end up with Naruto. Nice to see you have another Gyuki for Naruto to charm. Still looking forward to what you'll do with the original Gyuki.
Speaking of brilliant, what you did with the Five-Tails is so creatively brilliant. You even brought Tier's fraccion along! I remember reading some of the early chapters and thinking you weren't super creative. I apologize for doubting your abilities lol.
So with the Six-Tails is she currently in Mirajane's goth stage? And when you say she is short, does that mean she'll grow taller once she, mentally, matures?(that could take some time). Man you have to juggle some character development between the Six-Tails and Three-Tails. But I'm sure you got that sorted out.
And again great job on connecting the Three-Tails with Nel's character. Nice to see you arent just bringing familiar face but you develop similiar characteristics with the crossover chracters.
This story continues to broaden its horizons with Naruto's little discussion with the Fire Damiyo. Having the damiyo think he is superior to a super-powered Hokage adds a little more flavor. Also you dont dismiss the significance of the damiyos as Naruto tries to shape his world into a better place. This story has a really good plot that continurd to develop.
Just another brilliant chapter. You get a standing O for this Sage.Eroninja
(#) Dragonlord27 2013-08-07
I was thinking today and had an Idea related to this story. The bijū are leaving their old chakra bodies behind and moving into the new bodies, but can't this be taken in another direction and grow new chakra bodies in a seal so they can survive the death of their body's and Naruto and his lovers with high enough chakra levels can do the same.
Eroninja
(#) Daniel2610994 2017-11-23
So cool, now not only is tobi weakened a lot but he also lost an eye and arm, he even lost all that he had achieved in years in a singoe moment when he targeted konan one of narutos lovers so of course he went and saved her :3 and then they stealed the gedou mazo with all the bijuu they had collected hehe so now without the rinnegan and the bijuu free the juubi won't resurrect and tsat is in a way kinda sad because then naruto won't be able to seduce kaguya :'v
Anyway now the bijuu are free and they fell right into narutos arms, all except kukaku who is being difficult bug meh she wil come around looking for all the happiness all her sisters have or lose on it because she couldn't left her pride behind and be unhapoy while all her sisters are having the time of their lives, specially now that her fuck buddy is going to leave her.
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