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Reunion
Naruto is given a scroll containing the secrets of making women fall for him, a scroll he uses at first on the women around him but soon on the shinobi world as a whole, giving birth to the Ero-ninja.
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Eroninja
(#) Akuma-Heika 2013-07-19
what is rangikus' ash made of? IN BLEACH it is metal. DId she gain Iron Sand release as a human? SO far most of the biju have gained an element with their transformation. She made it catch fire...afvanced fire manipulation? ASUMA had aN ASH a technique. No where near as versitile and it couldn't cut. Her normal elements would be wind and maybe earth.
with the anime I had forgotten rangiku was a blond.
Thanks for the chapter!Author's response
I would say not so much Iron sand as that and the ash jutsu that Asuma used against Hidan combined. I wanted it to keep the qualities of Hinneko in Bleach and add the feature I saw in Naruto.Eroninja
(#) Nomugendai 2013-07-19
I'm gonna say that Kushina was lying to Mikoto. After all, when Minato died Itachi hadn't yet entered the academy, let alone made a name for himself.Author's response
I'm going to have to disagree with you there. By the time Minato had died Itachi was definitely in the academy as he graduated at age 7. Which he then graduated at the top of his class. To me a Hokage is constantly looking out for the next person they plan to elavate. I think even at a very young age Itachi would be on a very short list of people Minato would consider and keep an eye on.Eroninja
(#) Panther-Strife02 2013-07-19
tobi could get the jinchūriki from the Limited Tsukuyomi and Menma helps him out...as long he gets to the real world...then naruto would really be in danger.Eroninja
(#) Kenshin_Ryuu 2013-07-19
I like all the Bijuu assuming Bleach character identities. I kind of want to see all nine of them in human form cut loose on the White Zetsu army if Tobi still has access to it. Just those nine would be a massacre. I can totally see Naruto and Nel forming more of a sibling bond at first since she's so young mentally. Heaven help any bullies who pic on her since her sisters will make them pay. I also can't wait to see Gyuuki get a human form. I suggest a smaller body than Bee, but able to deck him with one blow to the back of the head to show their old relationship.Eroninja
(#) Qazwsxedcrfv 2013-07-19
Bleach! Bleach everywhe- wait, nope got some Fairy Tail in there too... because why the fuck not!
Though I must say, I had no idea what you were doing with the Gobi until the 'pink dots under her eye' and then I was like 'Oh snap!'. And the only reason I know who the Yonbi and Rokubi are is because of the list at the end.
Also, when you introduced Rangiku my train of thought was something like: 'Oh, yeah sure why not.' And then I realized that her power and Shukaku's were like the exact same and it was: 'OOOOOH DAMN, that makes sense!'
But probably my favorite thing about this chapter (outside of the smut of course) was the banter between the Bijuu, it just made it all seem more realistic in how they all didn't magically start liking each other.
So as all ways DAMN GOOD JOB! :)Eroninja
(#) Thanathos 2013-07-20
And another chapter sees the light of day. I can honestly say that it's awesome, and I'm pretty sure that all the well-deserved praises I could say have been said before. Though considering that you've essentially introduced eight new girls at the end of this chapter, and that you noted the next to be the first of the Blast from the Past-arc with Mito, that's nine new girls for Naruto next chapter, ten if you count how little we've seen from 'Rangiku' so far, that should get some character-development soon. I'm just a bit worried that the introductions will be cut short in favor of moving the story along. Wouldn't just the introduction of the bijuu themselves into this new environment deserve a chapter for itself before the past starts blasting?
I'm also admitting that I'm somewhat curious as to how the Blast from the Past-arc will go. Edo Tensei-resurrection upgraded like Haku's is a possibility, though it's just as possible that Naruto literally gets blasted back in time, though considering that the girls of the chapters will come in the order Mito, Guren, Toka, Samui and Sara, so we don't exactly have a linear timeline. I guess it'll be resurrection then, though considering Chiyo proved that that jutsu calls you as you were when you died, Kushina and possibly a few others will need a youth-treatment in addition to their 'get-out-of-death'-cards.
One part I didn't entirely get is when the Daimyo called Naruto "the shinobi of note" and Naruto replies he likes to think he's always been "a shinobi of worth". While both is certainly true, Naruto's answer doesn't exactly match what the daimyo said, as the two expressions mean completely different things. A shinobi of note is renowned, a shinobi of worth is useful. It is entirely possible to be either without being the other, so Naruto's statement doesn't really interact with the Daimyo's.
Well, you've written another great chapter that made my day, I hope the next will be soon.Author's response
I don't think you'll have to worry about the introductions being cut short. With Rangiku I could see her joining the harem rather quickly due to her impetuous nature. The others won't be nearly so quick to be bound.
If it helps think of each of the pasts as little arcs with the chapters not featuring a Past. In the title stading as their own. Meaning Samui wouldn't technically be a part of the arc, and as such what happens with Toka really has no bearing on what happened with Mito and Guren.
For the talk with the Daimyo, Naruto's reply was intentional. I imagine the Daimyo to be more interested in the fame and celebrity a person has achieved. At this point in his life I think Naruto simply would rather be useful. After all, he and his lovers are working to build a better world, but aren't doing it for the praise.
Thank you for the review.Eroninja
(#) TheCookieMonster77 2013-07-20
Nice to see a fast update. Just so you know, I like this story enough to read it on a family vacation. I guess I'm really lucky my little cousin doesn't like to read over my shoulder. Anyways, nice chapter. Looking forward to the next update!
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