- No offense or anything, but do you have to be with Gerard every time? It gets kind of annoying. That's why I tend to stay away from self-inserts, they're always the same fucking plot. Brief mention is totally fine, just, do not make the whole story about you.
Beside that, this was good. It was sad. Also, one tiny little nag, sorry about this. I don't like repeated plots. I know I've done too many suicide oneshots, but I'm really wearing of them now. Too depressing, and I do not wanna go down that road again.
Sorry about the nags, I just felt they were needed. Someone on here commited suicide the other day and I am just hating suicide.
(#) atomickilljoy 2013-07-27Sadie, it's her story. She can do what she pleases, let's leave it at that, okay?
I'm not talking about the self insert, although I guess that could apply(?), but she can make a suicidal story if she wants. You don't have to read it if you don't want to.
I'm not angry, it's just a thought. You can choose to follow it if you like, no one is forcing you, okay? c:
Great work, Christy c:
Sign up to review this story.