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As Days Fade, And Nights Grow
(#) ArsenicAutumn 2013-10-05
D: Oh dear, That poor girl! That must have been absolutely soul crushing... Can't wait to see what happens next!Author's response
I honestly don't know why I torture her so much hah... She sort of always brings it on herself, though, which is a big point cause I don't wanna victimize her too much and make it look like she ain't got nothing to do with whatever shitty things happen to her, y'know? I don't wanna MarySue her... Sometimes things happen that we have no part in causing but that's kind of rare, don't you think - most of the negative things in life are, even just partly, reaction to the choices we make, we're just really good at blaming everybody else ;)
Em is quite an example of that precisely!As Days Fade, And Nights Grow
(#) japulapu 2013-10-07
So that was quite an incredible chapter. You have every reason to be proud of it and slightly scared. It's a really interesting development and I kinda hate Gerard for doing what he did. In general it was a really moving chapter and I love how you did an amazing contrast. They were so happy and friendly one moment and everything looked like it would work out but then it kinda all just went to shit. That's how it happens so often and I relate to that. It was a crazy emotional roller coaster but I am really looking forward to a possible character development for Em. She has the power to be in control of her life, all she needs is the motivation. At the same time, I don't see her making an overnight recovery or any kind of recovery at all (please dont do that, I really want things to work out for Em, but you can still go ahead and do it, I love your writing anyway) All in all, I really enjoyed this chapter and it really put things in perspective. This might just be my favourite chapter so far. I felt everything Em felt, from elated to confused to messed up and drained to just numb. It was really awesome. I'll make sure to read the other stuff you put up and I'll review it today.Author's response
this chapter seems like such a long time ago! I think it has something to do with me disappearing for six months.. Sorry about that. There's a new chapter up in case the story still interests you after all this wait..
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