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Pretty In Punk
(#) syntheticlove1 2006-08-07
Good ol' pete to the rescue!
I like where this story is going.
Only thing that I dont like is the short chapters.
My opinion, you should make longer chapters.
Sure, it might take you abit longer, but that leaves everyone on the edge.Pretty In Punk
(#) sing4me09 2006-08-07
I love the story! one thing though...I was given this same comment and it totally worked for me...since the chapters are kind of short you should split them up, like put more spaces in between times when people are talking and what not. It makes it easier to read and makes it seem longer. great stuff please update soon!!
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