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Hinata has to get permission from Tsunade to told her little contest and while do what ever it takes to get it but will she take the easy or the hard way to get permission
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Queen of the Fox Den
(#) Shadow-Light 2014-03-01
I have to hand it to you this is diffidently a different approach to the ever popular Naruto/Harem genre.
Given how you started the first chapter I was curious where you would take it. In the end I can say that I was not disappointed by what I read.
The overall quality of the chapters was well above the standard of most fan fiction stories I have read in recent years; which is quite impressive.
Now since you stated you would be open to suggestions for who could be placed in the harem I was wondering if you would please consider the following characters:
Kurohime (One of the main characters from the same titled manga) - http://myanimelist.net/character/3849/Kurohime
Shizuka - http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Shizuka
Ino -http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Ino_Yamanaka
Mai Shiranui - http://snk.wikia.com/wiki/Mai_Shiranui
Chun-Li - http://streetfighter.wikia.com/wiki/Chun-Li
Cammy - http://streetfighter.wikia.com/wiki/Cammy
Taki - http://soulcalibur.wikia.com/wiki/Taki
Ivy - http://soulcalibur.wikia.com/wiki/Ivy
Juri Han - http://streetfighter.wikia.com/wiki/Juri
Maya Natsume - http://tenjoutenge.wikia.com/wiki/Maya_Natsume
Tsukiumi - http://sekirei.wikia.com/wiki/Tsukiumi
Ultear Milkovich - http://fairytail.wikia.com/wiki/Ultear_Milkovich
Minerva Orlando - http://fairytail.wikia.com/wiki/Minerva_Orlando
Leina Vance - http://queensblade.wikia.com/wiki/Leina_Vance
Cana Alberona - http://fairytail.wikia.com/wiki/Cana_Alberona
Risty - http://queensblade.wikia.com/wiki/Risty
Amaru - http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Amaru
Anko Mitarashi - http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Anko_Mitarashi
Hotaru - http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Hotaru
Karin - http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Karin
Hana Inuzuka - http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Hana_Inuzuka
Tsume Inuzuka - http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Tsume_Inuzuka
Mabui - http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Mabui
Tenten - http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Tenten
Shion - http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Shion
Sasame - http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Sasame
Yakumo Kurama - http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Yakumo
Author's response
Thanks for the kind review of my story but i can't take full credit for if i did not have a good beta reader like MikeJV37.
As for the characters you have proposed
I do not know all of them but you did give me some good ideas as i was thinking of hinata and a other woman facing hana and tsume inuzuka what do you think.
Also who should Hinata face in the next chapter and should naruto get a bigger part in the story or get to join in on the funQueen of the Fox Den
(#) Shadow-Light 2014-03-16
I'm glad that I was able to help. For the last two parts of your response I honestly would love to read that happen.
As for anyone I would suggest Hinata could face in the next chapter I think either Shizuka, or Juri Han would make for a interesting chapter.
Also I'm on the fence about if increasing Naruto's involvement and if would be a positive, or negative addition to the story. I mean it might add a interesting spark to some of the 'action', but if it is done too much then it could take away from the main focus of the story.
Though thinking about it if you do change the chapter's P.O.V. to show what Naruto is up to with the girls/women of his group might add some good development to the story. Another thing that could do is also keep the other characters Hinata has dominated from being forgotten by the readers.
Now I was wondering if you've considered either using, or creating some sexual/hentai themed jutsu for Hanata to use/encounter during her fights with these rivals?
On a side note if you want to take more about this then please feel free to contact me through my e-mail; all I ask is if you do that you please use this story's name as part of the subject you use to send it so I can know it's you.
Either way I look forward to reading the next chapter when it comes out.Author's response
i was thinking of doing a side story to show naruto side of this story but he will have get to join in the aftermatch fun or humilation when Hinata gets defeated.
But for now i need to think of her should be her opponent for round 3 as i already decided it has to be a girl around hinata age so shizuka can be the girl for that outfit as i am thinking of a girl from either a crossover or a girl from outside of konoha will be the next girl to face hinataQueen of the Fox Den
(#) londra 2014-03-17
i was thinking of doing a side story to show naruto side of this story but he will have get to join in the aftermatch fun or humilation when Hinata gets defeated.
But for now i need to think of her should be her opponent for round 3 as i already decided it has to be a girl around hinata age so shizuka can be the girl for that outfit as i am thinking of a girl from either a crossover or a girl from outside of konoha will be the next girl to face hinataQueen of the Fox Den
(#) vewtwo 2014-04-09
it will also be samui?Author's response
i was going to post this list in the next chapter but i will release a small list of hints of who will appear the rest be in the next chapter
Also the opponent for chapter 3 is Karin
Chapter 4 Hinata hyuuga vs Sakura Haruno and as a extra Naruto will now for the aftermatch fun
Chapter 5 It a crossover people and the circus is coming to town
Chapter 6 Has Hinata face one of her childhood fears
Chapter 7 A act of revenge for what a deceased Family member did will appear to have her revenge
chapter 8 well let's say their going to be a chance in the windsQueen of the Fox Den
(#) blackbankai 2014-04-17
will hinata fight samui,shion,yugito,fu,hotaru and mei terumi.Author's response
Chapter 4 Hinata hyuuga vs Sakura Haruno and as a extra Naruto will now for the aftermatch fun
Chapter 5 It a crossover people and the circus is coming to town
Chapter 6 Has Hinata face one of her childhood fears
Chapter 7 A act of revenge for what a deceased Family member did will appear to have her revenge
chapter 8 well let's say their going to be a chance in the winds
Well two of the girls you are wishing for can be her opponent in chapter 6 in the next chapter in which hinata will face karin i will include more hints for who will appear in the other chapters i do hope you can figure out some of the othersQueen of the Fox Den
(#) Jedi_Wizard 2014-04-30
Nice job on the story so far, I look forward to reading more.
-Why are all the quotes on italics?
-Also, I don't think Tsunade would ever have Naruto's child and not tell him.Author's response
those quotes are what is being said thats why i did those in italic.
Also i agree that tsunade would never not tell naruto but i needed a reason for the fight to happenQueen of the Fox Den
(#) jb_ghost 2014-10-25
Nice job, looking forward to more! I find it an interesting departure from most harem fics that you have Hinata gathering Naruto's harem rather than him doing it himself. That said, I wouldn't mind seeing some scenes to show Naruto with the defeated women, and/or Hinata revisiting them. It could definitely help with character development and allow the readers to revisit characters that they hadn't heard from for a while. Are the defeated women allowed to re-challenge her, or do they only get one chance? If they can, maybe there would be harsher consequences for failing a second time? Lastly, I'm not sure if you're taking suggestions for harem members but I'd definitely like to see Anko, Kurotsuchi, Shizuka (from the Nadeshiko filler episodes), Samui, Mabui, Hana and Tsume Inuzaka, Fu, and Konan. For crossover girls Seras from Hellsing, C.C. from Code Geass, Jibril from No Game No Life, Yoko from Guren Lagann, and Ryuko from Kill la Kill come to mind.Author's response
Thanks and was thinking of some of them but i got some in mind and some were girls what i did not think off so i have some thinking to do i do hope to have both the next chapter and a one shot between raven and jinx from teen titans up before the end of november sorry for the long wait but irl has bin a major problem for the last few months because if i was not busy at work i am so tired i could sleep for a month but the next chapter and one shot are almost done so wait a little longer.
and for your suggestion wait and see because hinata will lose or tie whit a girl sometimes and lucky for her naruto got two last namesQueen of the Fox Den
(#) weird-d 2015-04-12
Is this just a repost, or does it mean you'll update this fic soon?Author's response
i be updating soon and maybe post one or two new stories as well
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