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Naruto is given a scroll containing the secrets of making women fall for him, a scroll he uses at first on the women around him but soon on the shinobi world as a whole, giving birth to the Eroninja.
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Eroninja
(#) xxconfusionxsucksxx 2014-05-29
After reading this..well just wanted to know when the next chapter will be uploaded.. the chapter is good many insights bout the other things happening within the village and etc..just did'nt see it coming that sora to be the main villain in this charade attacking many villages thought that it could still be his father.
about kushina well i still want her to have her own body and do it with naruto..
about fuku well i like the way she's feeling now..the dampness,,haha..that's what you get when you try still some of naruto's chakra..
and yeah bout the dream or is whatsoever is that..kind left me puzzled..
looking forward to the next chapter..i hope it takes only days but yeah for sure real life is on the way again..but again goodluck..and thumbs up for the good work..Eroninja
(#) xxconfusionxsucksxx 2014-05-29
I remember now what the second act to the last is..yeah..just remember D..during the limelight of Naruko..
i think the girl in that dream or vision is Kurotsuchi..did i say the name right?..ehehehEroninja
(#) bakapervert 2014-05-29
Intersting twist with Sora. But other than that its so-so chapter. But the prophetic dream seems interesting what with the appearance of Kurotsuchi. Cant wait till we get to that part.Eroninja
(#) beach_bum_from_miami 2014-05-29
Very interesting take with Sora. I really wasn't expecting that. Also that was cool what you did with Fuka. He'll have an insider eventuallyEroninja
(#) LeafRanger5 2014-05-29
Ugghh, damnit, did they have to capture Naruto?! I mean okay, so this isn't as bad as earlier when you were about to have Tayuya be raped, but seriously, why can't Naruto just kick ass, take names, and that's it? Why do these smug, arrogant, asshole enemies have to have any victories, even small ones?! It's bad enough we got that crap in canon manga.
Sorry just...ugghh, I didn't like that. At all. Sorry. shrugsEroninja
(#) HeGotGame 2014-05-29
This was a great chapter. Don't know why all these people are complaining. There were a lot of things that I liked about this chapter.
To be honest, after the last chapter, I never once considered the prospect of Anko 'rehabilitating' Haruna so that she could become one of Naruto's lovers in earnest, rather than via a proxy (through Anko), even a distinct possibility. It's not a stretch for me to say that to hear the S&M woman say as much was a pleasant development. It'll be very interesting to see how she goes about it, and if it does indeed occur, how long the rehabilitative processes take.
Naruto's capture definitely makes sense considering the sequence of events that took pace prior to its occurrence. When he saw Chiriku's concern for Sora, his perceptions were colored, and they were only cemented by Sora's acting, which, as was said in-chapter, reminded Naruto of himself when he accesses four-tails worth of chakra. Fudo's timely appearance was the final nail in the coffin. Also, his capture served as a great opportunity for Fuka to fall under his influence by siphoning his chakra, which is still laced with the Tempation's Touch, not to mention the fact that she no longer has that freaky soul-housed-in-her-hair bit; so, great job with that.
So next chapter will be a rehashing of that clone, D's, escapades. Interesting that he was betrayed by a henged Kurotsuchi; looks like she pulled off what Maki couldn't, which was kill 'Naruto' after making love. I can't wait for the next chapter, as well as what Naruto himself will do armed with the knowledge that his clone transferred to him upon its death. Looking forward to it.Eroninja
(#) minato 2014-05-30
First,I am pretty sure fuka cant suck all of naruto's chakra in that short period of time and the way he was taken down by sora was kinda unrealistic since u portrayed him as someone who is mature,can read btw the lines,a good judge of character and smart,am pretty sure he wouldnt have fallen for a cheap tactic and to also trust an unknown shinobi he hasnt even known for less than a minute that he was able to leave his ungaurded back towards Sora.Anyways upload soon,coz I want to see how naruto gets out of these mess and plz plz plz,make the next chapter longer
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