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Naruto is given a scroll containing the secrets of making women fall for him, a scroll he uses at first on the women around him but soon on the shinobi world as a whole, giving birth to the Eroninja.
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Eroninja
(#) BomeranG 2014-06-16
As always very good. Lately your story is getting even better but now that you gotten very detached from cannon I wonder how will it go?
Anyway, one surprise is that I really didn't thing kurotsuchi as seducer type, even Tayuya said she wasn't certain if she was a girl or a boy.Eroninja
(#) Daniel2610994 2017-11-26
Goddammit this is where thing start to go in really bad ways for naruto and his girls :'v like him being abducted by that fucker sora, then the life and death of d by kurotsuchi, and then the incasion of that crazy bitch furofuki and that is only in the next chapters xD man this is definitely the best story ever :3Eroninja
(#) Yolo1509tlt 2021-11-20
You know this story you have many strange points, good, bad, and very contradictory, how qiyomi forces the relationship of youroichi and soifong, I think you just wanted to write yuri, I think the story would have gone better without that, how kiba is stays with aeris and yuffle, which is strange it seemed that you wanted to link them to naruto but in the end you backed off, but you randomly joined tiffa with naruto, so we all adore tiffa enough to leave her with kiba, although I honestly think that you lost a lot the path of history, naruto no longer seduces or tries to get girls or people for his goal, it seems that he just gets carried away by everything that happens around him and does not think about things, he feels hollow
It seems strange to me that you pay more attention when developing the stories of the children of the moon than the relationships of naruto, it really seems that since you added lls bijus the story became extremely chaotic, anko trying to get hana's dogs to ride it, naruto accepting what qiyomi does with the final fantasy trio, it seems that you lose several things in the story, I do not think it is very interesting to know about the love life of kiba or lee, it is somewhat annoying that you try to develop them more than the harem girls , There is so much to exploit, but it seems that the story became annoying, I still do not read the mafias arc, but it promises a lot for me, open the map to the sound of the land of water and the problems that this country may have, As in the small ones, it would be interesting to see how Naruto gains ground there, since it is something annoying that he has not done much for his goal, seriously, it seems that he is only standing and lets everything happen, there are no consequences, Anko could try to make Some dogs Ride Haruka, that was one of the most unpleasant moments of the fic, I really hope you give naruto more sense, it feels like it barely has weight in the story, I think that also the group of girls looking for possible candidates takes something away to the fic, of a naruto who tries to seduce girls or show him the goal he is trying to achieve, I hope that in the following arcs you show more of how naruto influences the story in a more significant way, it seems that the fact that everything he does remains in the shadows are creating a kind of wall for development
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(#) milessmith1111 2022-08-05
Wow, a lot of twists happened in this chapter. One of the most surprising of these is that Sora is going to be a villain in this story and outsmarted Kazuma and took over his crew. In addition to that, the capture alive bounty on Naruto is probably from Kabuto wanting Naruto's unique chakra. It was also a surprise that Fuka is alive and probably accidentally bound herself to Naruto. I can't wait to see her reaction to that. It also looks like D has died and Naruto is going to see what happens in his life. I can't wait to see what happens next in this fantastic story.Eroninja
(#) StormSage 2024-11-02
Okay people who are saying that we're complaining about Naruto being captured is dumb, I'm going to assume that you as well as LemonSage didn't do your research on what sage mode does and just assumed it was just a power boost. Sage mode enhances the user's strength, speed, reflexes, perception, and durability. It also let's them use the natural chakra around them to give them sensory abilities. They can also sense attacks coming EVEN IF THEY CAN'T SEE THEM. IN OTHER WORDS NARUTO WOULD HAVE FELT SORA'S ATTACK COMING.
It isn't that most of us are mad that Naruto was caught by surprise. It's that he shouldn't have been while in sage mode. It was stupid when Mito was smacking him around then, just like it was stupid now.
There's a reason Hishirama was beating Madara despite Madara having EMS. He had SAGE MODE.Author's response
No offense but your reasoning is flawed. There is a difference between sensing an attack, and reacting to it, and as Naruto already just reacted to the arrival of a new threat by putting himself between it and Sora. It left him open to attack. Furthermore there is a difference between facing someone in a one on one battle, and being maneuvered into a back attack. Also Hishirama also had his wood release as well, so it wasn't just that he could become a sage that he could go to to toe with Madara.
Ultimately they used his nature against him to maneuver him into a position where they could strike quickly because they were aware of how dangerous he was. Just saying but he was in sage mode, so can't be beaten by people who outthink him is nonsense. Again there is a difference from sensing a attack, and reacting to it. Not to mention sensing something when you are directing your focus towards someone you perceive to be a bigger threat in the moment.Eroninja
(#) StormSage 2024-11-02
Okay people who are saying that we're complaining about Naruto being captured is dumb, I'm going to assume that you as well as LemonSage didn't do your research on what sage mode does and just assumed it was just a power boost. Sage mode enhances the user's strength, speed, reflexes, perception, and durability. It also let's them use the natural chakra around them to give them sensory abilities. They can also sense attacks coming EVEN IF THEY CAN'T SEE THEM. IN OTHER WORDS NARUTO WOULD HAVE FELT SORA'S ATTACK COMING.
It isn't that most of us are mad that Naruto was caught by surprise. It's that he shouldn't have been while in sage mode. It was stupid when Mito was smacking him around then, just like it was stupid now.
There's a reason Hishirama was beating Madara despite Madara having EMS. He had SAGE MODE.
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