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Children of Hecate
6 reviewsHarry Potter arrives much earlier at the train station and meets Hermione, they become friends. However, they find out they have been blessed by a special lady, who is this lady and what does 'bein...
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Children of Hecate
(#) jadesabrexiv 2014-06-15
Nice way to shift the balance of who is who in Harry Potter. The shift on birthdays was a nice touch. Good way to get Luna introduced early and in a manner that is unavoidably correct and believable.
The way you treated "moRon" was nice. I honestly think that is one of the better ways I've seen his intro shifted in a while.
Getting Neville in the cabin worked. Without Hermione sharing his cabin, there would be no reason for him NOT to roam around looking for his almost brother.
Are you going to shift Ginny's birthday as well to make her a level lower than she is in canon?
It would only really take about 2 weeks. I think that would make her in the same year as that Vane chit. Hee Hee.
I will look forward to the next chapter and hope that the spacing issue (pretty common here on FICWAD) is fixed. JSX
FYI: You have at least one person with an ALERT on this fic.Children of Hecate
(#) dennisud 2014-06-16
Good start to this! I see you changed some birthdays to have Luna involved! and your Ron is being very 2-dimensional so be careful you don't make him too flat in his personality!
Suggest a few other to be their friends, Susan Bones, Daphne Greengrass, etc...
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(#) Cateagle 2014-06-17
Very interesting start. I'll be looking forward to seeing where you take it.Children of Hecate
(#) Bronze 2015-08-22
I really have to wonder who's behind setting up Ron the wonder idiot trying to become friends with Harry. You'd have to blind and extremely moronic to not see it! I agree with Cateagle about introducing Harry to several of his friends in later years early. It'd let them instruct him on his heritage. With that said keep the story coming.
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