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Chapter 1 - Preparations
5 reviewsThe second blood war against Voldermort had come at a to high price and Harry and his friends have decided to do something about it.
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The Fellowship of the Fox
by Ryuuohjin
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Disclaimer - I do not on any way own Harry Potter or any of it's world or characters.
They all fully belong to J.K. Rowling and her affiliates.
Got bored with plot and decided a rewrite of this story, changed the title from "Harry Potter No More" to "The Fellowship of the Fox".
Will still be AU and contain time travel, Fem!Harry, pairings still haven't decided yet.
Update 2015-03-10: Fixed several errors & mistakes I seemed have missed.
Update 2015-04-27: Now been betaed by Dragon Ashes. Thank you for that, Dragon Ashes.
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Chapter 1 - Preparations
The second war against Voldermort had been devastating. Sure they had won, but just barely, and the price for that victory had been way too high. Both the Patil and the Weasley twins had fallen in the final battle, and so had Tonks, Remus, and Lee Jordan, along with several others. Colin Crevey, and his brother Dennis, they lost their lives when the Death Eaters attacked their houses. Katie Bell had perished along with Justin Finch-Fletchley, when Draco Malfoy had let Death Eaters into the castle in their sixth year. Neville lost both of his parents and grandmother during a Death Eater raid on St. Mungo's. Luna had lost her father when the Death Eaters had attacked her house. Sirius, Cedric, Dumbeldore and Moody had lost their lives in the years before. They lost Cedric in their forth year, Sirius in their fifth, Dumbeldore in their sixth and Moody just before their seventh.
Only a tenth of the magical population of Britain had survived the war. The number of victims in muggle world was unknown, they only knew it been several thousands. Some month after the final battle Harry, Ron and Hermione, along with Luna, Ginny and Neville had decided that the future needed to be changed. Years of study, research and preparations were dedicated towards this goal.
They studied everything from wandmaking and enchanting, to curse breaking and spell crafting. They researched Blood Magic and Parsel Magic, even Runic Magic and Shamanic Magic, just in case they could learn anything useful there.
They had even gotten the goblins to help them with their project. They were the ones who had provided the means to send one person with a trunk back to the past.
It been decided that it would be Harry to take trip back, but actually Harry volunteered and had refused to take “no” for an answer. The first part of their plan was to alter Harry's appearance and to enhance his senses. They would do this because they realized that as Harry Potter and the Boy-Who-Lived, he would have way much focus on him to do what he needed to do. So the Boy-Who-Lived need to disappear, and this was first step in doing just that.
The Boy-Who-Lived needed disappear anyway, he would just be hindrance in plans for the past. They decided that for Harry to be as inconspicuous as possible, they would change his gender, and de-age him at bit while they were at it. The main reason for these changes, except that few would connect the girl he would become to the Boy-Who-Lived, was people more let guards down around small children, girls especially. And since he was going to travel troubled times, they decided to give him some additional perks as well.
Their research showed that they could accomplish this through some blood rituals they had found. According to some texts they had found, would grant a person traits from an animal. They would mix that with some potions-based rituals to permanently alter one's sex and age. After much hassle and hard work, they managed to combine the rituals into one potion -ased blood ritual. They even managed to borrow one of ritual rooms underneath Gringotts to perform it.
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"Is everything set?" a goblin asked the assembled crew of witches and wizards.
"Yes, everything is set," Hermione replied somewhat nervously.
They were inside a large room made of black obsidian, and on middle of the floor a large ring had been painted. The outer edge of the ring was filled strange runes, symbols and glyphs. Inside the ring a large pentagram had been painted. At the point furthest from the entrance stood Hermione. To her left sat her familiar, a half- kneazle named Crookshanks. To her right, across from Crookshanks, sat a big grey wolf they captured for just for this ritual. Beneath them stood Ginny and Luna, all the girls gotten several different runes and symbols painted on various parts of their body. In the middle of the pentagram a smaller circle had been painted, and there is were Harry sat. He was also naked, but unlike girls he didn't have any runes or symbols painted on him. In front of him a vial had been placed. The vial contained a complex potion they had brewed just for this ritual.
"Well then, let's get this show on the road," Harry said and grabbed the vial. "Cheers," he said swallowed it all in one go.
After he drank the potion, Neville, Ron, and gathered goblin shamans started to chant. As they chanted the drawings on floor began pulsate and glow, till finally an explosion of light and magic threw everyone, besides Harry, out of the circles and against the walls. Anyone who had been in the circles, was knocked out as they hit the wall. When Neville's and Ron's vision returned, their jaws just about dropped to the floor as they saw Harry being surrounded by torrents of magic.
The ceiling and the floor started to crack, and even the walls suffered some damage under the pressure of the magic. They all watched as the magic that surrounded him was starting to rise him into the air. A perfect sphere of pure magic could now be seen surrounding him. The very air seemed to tremble as they watched Harry hanging naked in the air for about a second or two. Then the magic seemed to wrap itself around him and they saw open his mouth in a silent scream. After that they were unable too see what was happening, as a solid sphere of light was formed around him.
For several minutes they stood there, his friends almost going crazy with worries and what ifs. Then suddenly a crack was heard and the sphere started to show cracks and tears. In a single burst the sphere that had surrounded Harry exploded into a million pieces. The pieces of the sphere looked like a rainbow coloured meteor shower, disappearing when they hit the floor. The light blinded everyone for a few seconds, but what they then saw when they saw made them gasp. Suspended in the air was a person but it didn't look anything like the Harry they knew.
First there was the long, gradient hair that went past the waist. It was unlike anything either Neville or Ron had ever seen . It seemed to be full of life and was literally radiating with an inner glow of its own. It was pitch black at the roots, which then slowly faded to fiery red at tips. The next thing they noticed was that a pair large wolf ears were where his ears should be. Not to mention the big and fluffy tail to protruding from the end of his spine. While he still had knobby knees and elbows, they remembered him to have when he was younger. Harry's new body was now quite cute in its own way. The ritual was supposed to turn Harry in to a twelve year old, but he looked to be about six. His body was petite and lithe, with lightly tanned olive skin and well-defined stomach with a cute belly button. While the stomach was muscled, it was not enough to see the abdominal muscles. He gotten well shaped, at least for someone his age current age, hips and upper thighs, ended by a adorable set of feet.
Ever so slowly Harry started to descend until he was lying on the cracked floor. Ron slowly approached him and reached out with his hand. Harry was still unconscious and didn't move an inch. As Neville sat down on the floor beside, still in shock at what he had seen, looking over Harry. There was no one blemish or scar visible on his entire body, that could prove that this was Harry. The lightning bolt shaped scar that had been present on his forehead was no more.
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TBC
//////// AN /////////
That's was the first rewrite of this story, so what do you think, any thoughts, ideas, comments are appreciated, so please review.
That's all for now thank you for reading.
Ryuuohjin
///////////////////////
The Fellowship of the Fox
by Ryuuohjin
///////// AN//////////
Disclaimer - I do not on any way own Harry Potter or any of it's world or characters.
They all fully belong to J.K. Rowling and her affiliates.
Got bored with plot and decided a rewrite of this story, changed the title from "Harry Potter No More" to "The Fellowship of the Fox".
Will still be AU and contain time travel, Fem!Harry, pairings still haven't decided yet.
Update 2015-03-10:Fixed several errors & mistakes I seemed have missed.
Update 2015-04-27:Now been betaed by Dragon Ashes. Thank you for that, Dragon Ashes.
/////////////////////
Chapter 1 -Preparations
The second war against Voldermort had been devastating. Sure they had won, but just barely, and the price for that victory had been way too high. Both the Patil and the Weasley twins had fallen in the final battle, and so had Tonks, Remus, and Lee Jordan, along with several others. Colin Crevey, and his brother Dennis, they lost their lives when the Death Eaters attacked their houses. Katie Bell had perished along with Justin Finch-Fletchley, when Draco Malfoy had let Death Eaters into the castle in their sixth year. Neville lost both of his parents and grandmother during a Death Eater raid on St. Mungo's. Luna had lost her father when the Death Eaters had attacked her house. Sirius, Cedric, Dumbeldore and Moody had lost their lives in the years before. They lost Cedric in their forth year, Sirius in their fifth, Dumbeldore in their sixth and Moody just before their seventh.
Only a tenth of the magical population of Britain had survived the war. The number of victims in muggle world was unknown, they only knew it been several thousands. Some month after the final battle Harry, Ron and Hermione, along with Luna, Ginny and Neville had decided that the future needed to be changed. Years of study, research and preparations were dedicated towards this goal.
They studied everything from wandmaking and enchanting, to curse breaking and spell crafting. They researched Blood Magic and Parsel Magic, even Runic Magic and Shamanic Magic, just in case they could learn anything useful there.
They had even gotten the goblins to help them with their project. They were the ones who had provided the means to send one person with a trunk back to the past.
It been decided that it would be Harry to take trip back, but actually Harry volunteered and had refused to take “no” for an answer. The first part of their plan was to alter Harry's appearance and to enhance his senses. They would do this because they realized that as Harry Potter and the Boy-Who-Lived, he would have way much focus on him to do what he needed to do. So the Boy-Who-Lived need to disappear, and this was first step in doing just that.
The Boy-Who-Lived needed disappear anyway, he would just be hindrance in plans for the past. They decided that for Harry to be as inconspicuous as possible, they would change his gender, and de-age him at bit while they were at it. The main reason for these changes, except that few would connect the girl he would become to the Boy-Who-Lived, was people more let guards down around small children, girls especially. And since he was going to travel troubled times, they decided to give him some additional perks as well.
Their research showed that they could accomplish this through some blood rituals they had found. According to some texts they had found, would grant a person traits from an animal. They would mix that with some potions-based rituals to permanently alter one's sex and age. After much hassle and hard work, they managed to combine the rituals into one potion -ased blood ritual. They even managed to borrow one of ritual rooms underneath Gringotts to perform it.
//////////////////////////
"Is everything set?" a goblin asked the assembled crew of witches and wizards.
"Yes, everything is set," Hermione replied somewhat nervously.
They were inside alarge room made of black obsidian, and on middle of the floor a large ring had been painted. The outer edge of the ring was filled strange runes, symbols and glyphs. Inside the ring a large pentagram had been painted. At the point furthest from the entrance stood Hermione. To her left sat her familiar, a half- kneazle named Crookshanks. To her right, across from Crookshanks, sat a big grey wolf they captured for just for this ritual. Beneath them stood Ginny and Luna, all the girls gotten several different runes and symbols painted on various parts of their body. In the middle of the pentagram a smaller circle had been painted, and there is were Harry sat. He was also naked, but unlike girls he didn't have any runes or symbols painted on him. In front of him a vial had been placed. The vial contained a complex potion they had brewed just for this ritual.
"Well then, let's get this show on the road," Harry said and grabbed the vial."Cheers," he said swallowed it all in one go.
After he drank the potion, Neville, Ron, and gathered goblin shamans started to chant. As they chanted the drawings on floor began pulsate and glow, till finally an explosion of light and magic threw everyone, besides Harry, out of the circles and against the walls. Anyone who had been in the circles, was knocked out as they hit the wall. When Neville's and Ron's vision returned, their jaws just about dropped to the floor as they saw Harry being surrounded by torrents of magic.
The ceiling and the floor started to crack, and even the walls suffered some damage under the pressure of the magic. They all watched as the magic that surrounded him was starting to rise him into the air. A perfect sphere of pure magic could now be seen surrounding him. The very air seemed to tremble as they watched Harry hanging naked in the air for about a second or two. Then the magic seemed to wrap itself around him and they saw open his mouth in a silent scream. After that they were unable too see what was happening, as a solid sphere of light was formed around him.
For several minutes they stood there, his friends almost going crazy with worries and what ifs. Then suddenly a crack was heard and the sphere started to show cracks and tears. In a single burst the sphere that had surrounded Harry exploded into a million pieces. The pieces of the sphere looked like a rainbow coloured meteor shower, disappearing when they hit the floor. The light blinded everyone for a few seconds, but what they then saw when they saw made them gasp. Suspended in the air was a person but it didn't look anything like the Harry they knew.
First there was the long, gradient hair that went past the waist. It was unlike anything either Neville or Ron had ever seen . It seemed to be full of life and was literally radiating with an inner glow of its own. It was pitch black at the roots, which then slowly faded to fiery red at tips. The next thing they noticed was that a pair large wolf ears were where his ears should be. Not to mention the big and fluffy tail to protruding from the end of his spine. While he still had knobby knees and elbows, they remembered him to have when he was younger. Harry's new body was now quite cute in its own way. The ritual was supposed to turn Harry in to a twelve year old, but he looked to be about six. His body was petite and lithe, with lightly tanned olive skin and well-defined stomach with a cute belly button. While the stomach was muscled, it was not enough to see the abdominal muscles. He gotten well shaped, at least for someone his age current age, hips and upper thighs, ended by a adorable set of feet.
Ever so slowly Harry started to descend until he was lying on the cracked floor. Ron slowly approached him and reached out with his hand. Harry was still unconscious and didn't move an inch. As Neville sat down on the floor beside, still in shock at what he had seen, looking over Harry. There was no one blemish or scar visible on his entire body, that could prove that this was Harry. The lightning bolt shaped scar that had been present on his forehead was no more.
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TBC
////////// AN///////////
That's was the first rewrite of this story, so what do you think, any thoughts, ideas, comments are appreciated, so please review.
That's all for now thank you for reading.
Ryuuohjin
/////////////////////////
by Ryuuohjin
/////// AN ////////
Disclaimer - I do not on any way own Harry Potter or any of it's world or characters.
They all fully belong to J.K. Rowling and her affiliates.
Got bored with plot and decided a rewrite of this story, changed the title from "Harry Potter No More" to "The Fellowship of the Fox".
Will still be AU and contain time travel, Fem!Harry, pairings still haven't decided yet.
Update 2015-03-10: Fixed several errors & mistakes I seemed have missed.
Update 2015-04-27: Now been betaed by Dragon Ashes. Thank you for that, Dragon Ashes.
/////////////////////
Chapter 1 - Preparations
The second war against Voldermort had been devastating. Sure they had won, but just barely, and the price for that victory had been way too high. Both the Patil and the Weasley twins had fallen in the final battle, and so had Tonks, Remus, and Lee Jordan, along with several others. Colin Crevey, and his brother Dennis, they lost their lives when the Death Eaters attacked their houses. Katie Bell had perished along with Justin Finch-Fletchley, when Draco Malfoy had let Death Eaters into the castle in their sixth year. Neville lost both of his parents and grandmother during a Death Eater raid on St. Mungo's. Luna had lost her father when the Death Eaters had attacked her house. Sirius, Cedric, Dumbeldore and Moody had lost their lives in the years before. They lost Cedric in their forth year, Sirius in their fifth, Dumbeldore in their sixth and Moody just before their seventh.
Only a tenth of the magical population of Britain had survived the war. The number of victims in muggle world was unknown, they only knew it been several thousands. Some month after the final battle Harry, Ron and Hermione, along with Luna, Ginny and Neville had decided that the future needed to be changed. Years of study, research and preparations were dedicated towards this goal.
They studied everything from wandmaking and enchanting, to curse breaking and spell crafting. They researched Blood Magic and Parsel Magic, even Runic Magic and Shamanic Magic, just in case they could learn anything useful there.
They had even gotten the goblins to help them with their project. They were the ones who had provided the means to send one person with a trunk back to the past.
It been decided that it would be Harry to take trip back, but actually Harry volunteered and had refused to take “no” for an answer. The first part of their plan was to alter Harry's appearance and to enhance his senses. They would do this because they realized that as Harry Potter and the Boy-Who-Lived, he would have way much focus on him to do what he needed to do. So the Boy-Who-Lived need to disappear, and this was first step in doing just that.
The Boy-Who-Lived needed disappear anyway, he would just be hindrance in plans for the past. They decided that for Harry to be as inconspicuous as possible, they would change his gender, and de-age him at bit while they were at it. The main reason for these changes, except that few would connect the girl he would become to the Boy-Who-Lived, was people more let guards down around small children, girls especially. And since he was going to travel troubled times, they decided to give him some additional perks as well.
Their research showed that they could accomplish this through some blood rituals they had found. According to some texts they had found, would grant a person traits from an animal. They would mix that with some potions-based rituals to permanently alter one's sex and age. After much hassle and hard work, they managed to combine the rituals into one potion -ased blood ritual. They even managed to borrow one of ritual rooms underneath Gringotts to perform it.
//////////////////////////
"Is everything set?" a goblin asked the assembled crew of witches and wizards.
"Yes, everything is set," Hermione replied somewhat nervously.
They were inside a large room made of black obsidian, and on middle of the floor a large ring had been painted. The outer edge of the ring was filled strange runes, symbols and glyphs. Inside the ring a large pentagram had been painted. At the point furthest from the entrance stood Hermione. To her left sat her familiar, a half- kneazle named Crookshanks. To her right, across from Crookshanks, sat a big grey wolf they captured for just for this ritual. Beneath them stood Ginny and Luna, all the girls gotten several different runes and symbols painted on various parts of their body. In the middle of the pentagram a smaller circle had been painted, and there is were Harry sat. He was also naked, but unlike girls he didn't have any runes or symbols painted on him. In front of him a vial had been placed. The vial contained a complex potion they had brewed just for this ritual.
"Well then, let's get this show on the road," Harry said and grabbed the vial. "Cheers," he said swallowed it all in one go.
After he drank the potion, Neville, Ron, and gathered goblin shamans started to chant. As they chanted the drawings on floor began pulsate and glow, till finally an explosion of light and magic threw everyone, besides Harry, out of the circles and against the walls. Anyone who had been in the circles, was knocked out as they hit the wall. When Neville's and Ron's vision returned, their jaws just about dropped to the floor as they saw Harry being surrounded by torrents of magic.
The ceiling and the floor started to crack, and even the walls suffered some damage under the pressure of the magic. They all watched as the magic that surrounded him was starting to rise him into the air. A perfect sphere of pure magic could now be seen surrounding him. The very air seemed to tremble as they watched Harry hanging naked in the air for about a second or two. Then the magic seemed to wrap itself around him and they saw open his mouth in a silent scream. After that they were unable too see what was happening, as a solid sphere of light was formed around him.
For several minutes they stood there, his friends almost going crazy with worries and what ifs. Then suddenly a crack was heard and the sphere started to show cracks and tears. In a single burst the sphere that had surrounded Harry exploded into a million pieces. The pieces of the sphere looked like a rainbow coloured meteor shower, disappearing when they hit the floor. The light blinded everyone for a few seconds, but what they then saw when they saw made them gasp. Suspended in the air was a person but it didn't look anything like the Harry they knew.
First there was the long, gradient hair that went past the waist. It was unlike anything either Neville or Ron had ever seen . It seemed to be full of life and was literally radiating with an inner glow of its own. It was pitch black at the roots, which then slowly faded to fiery red at tips. The next thing they noticed was that a pair large wolf ears were where his ears should be. Not to mention the big and fluffy tail to protruding from the end of his spine. While he still had knobby knees and elbows, they remembered him to have when he was younger. Harry's new body was now quite cute in its own way. The ritual was supposed to turn Harry in to a twelve year old, but he looked to be about six. His body was petite and lithe, with lightly tanned olive skin and well-defined stomach with a cute belly button. While the stomach was muscled, it was not enough to see the abdominal muscles. He gotten well shaped, at least for someone his age current age, hips and upper thighs, ended by a adorable set of feet.
Ever so slowly Harry started to descend until he was lying on the cracked floor. Ron slowly approached him and reached out with his hand. Harry was still unconscious and didn't move an inch. As Neville sat down on the floor beside, still in shock at what he had seen, looking over Harry. There was no one blemish or scar visible on his entire body, that could prove that this was Harry. The lightning bolt shaped scar that had been present on his forehead was no more.
//////////////////////////////
TBC
//////// AN /////////
That's was the first rewrite of this story, so what do you think, any thoughts, ideas, comments are appreciated, so please review.
That's all for now thank you for reading.
Ryuuohjin
///////////////////////
The Fellowship of the Fox
by Ryuuohjin
///////// AN//////////
Disclaimer - I do not on any way own Harry Potter or any of it's world or characters.
They all fully belong to J.K. Rowling and her affiliates.
Got bored with plot and decided a rewrite of this story, changed the title from "Harry Potter No More" to "The Fellowship of the Fox".
Will still be AU and contain time travel, Fem!Harry, pairings still haven't decided yet.
Update 2015-03-10:Fixed several errors & mistakes I seemed have missed.
Update 2015-04-27:Now been betaed by Dragon Ashes. Thank you for that, Dragon Ashes.
/////////////////////
Chapter 1 -Preparations
The second war against Voldermort had been devastating. Sure they had won, but just barely, and the price for that victory had been way too high. Both the Patil and the Weasley twins had fallen in the final battle, and so had Tonks, Remus, and Lee Jordan, along with several others. Colin Crevey, and his brother Dennis, they lost their lives when the Death Eaters attacked their houses. Katie Bell had perished along with Justin Finch-Fletchley, when Draco Malfoy had let Death Eaters into the castle in their sixth year. Neville lost both of his parents and grandmother during a Death Eater raid on St. Mungo's. Luna had lost her father when the Death Eaters had attacked her house. Sirius, Cedric, Dumbeldore and Moody had lost their lives in the years before. They lost Cedric in their forth year, Sirius in their fifth, Dumbeldore in their sixth and Moody just before their seventh.
Only a tenth of the magical population of Britain had survived the war. The number of victims in muggle world was unknown, they only knew it been several thousands. Some month after the final battle Harry, Ron and Hermione, along with Luna, Ginny and Neville had decided that the future needed to be changed. Years of study, research and preparations were dedicated towards this goal.
They studied everything from wandmaking and enchanting, to curse breaking and spell crafting. They researched Blood Magic and Parsel Magic, even Runic Magic and Shamanic Magic, just in case they could learn anything useful there.
They had even gotten the goblins to help them with their project. They were the ones who had provided the means to send one person with a trunk back to the past.
It been decided that it would be Harry to take trip back, but actually Harry volunteered and had refused to take “no” for an answer. The first part of their plan was to alter Harry's appearance and to enhance his senses. They would do this because they realized that as Harry Potter and the Boy-Who-Lived, he would have way much focus on him to do what he needed to do. So the Boy-Who-Lived need to disappear, and this was first step in doing just that.
The Boy-Who-Lived needed disappear anyway, he would just be hindrance in plans for the past. They decided that for Harry to be as inconspicuous as possible, they would change his gender, and de-age him at bit while they were at it. The main reason for these changes, except that few would connect the girl he would become to the Boy-Who-Lived, was people more let guards down around small children, girls especially. And since he was going to travel troubled times, they decided to give him some additional perks as well.
Their research showed that they could accomplish this through some blood rituals they had found. According to some texts they had found, would grant a person traits from an animal. They would mix that with some potions-based rituals to permanently alter one's sex and age. After much hassle and hard work, they managed to combine the rituals into one potion -ased blood ritual. They even managed to borrow one of ritual rooms underneath Gringotts to perform it.
//////////////////////////
"Is everything set?" a goblin asked the assembled crew of witches and wizards.
"Yes, everything is set," Hermione replied somewhat nervously.
They were inside alarge room made of black obsidian, and on middle of the floor a large ring had been painted. The outer edge of the ring was filled strange runes, symbols and glyphs. Inside the ring a large pentagram had been painted. At the point furthest from the entrance stood Hermione. To her left sat her familiar, a half- kneazle named Crookshanks. To her right, across from Crookshanks, sat a big grey wolf they captured for just for this ritual. Beneath them stood Ginny and Luna, all the girls gotten several different runes and symbols painted on various parts of their body. In the middle of the pentagram a smaller circle had been painted, and there is were Harry sat. He was also naked, but unlike girls he didn't have any runes or symbols painted on him. In front of him a vial had been placed. The vial contained a complex potion they had brewed just for this ritual.
"Well then, let's get this show on the road," Harry said and grabbed the vial."Cheers," he said swallowed it all in one go.
After he drank the potion, Neville, Ron, and gathered goblin shamans started to chant. As they chanted the drawings on floor began pulsate and glow, till finally an explosion of light and magic threw everyone, besides Harry, out of the circles and against the walls. Anyone who had been in the circles, was knocked out as they hit the wall. When Neville's and Ron's vision returned, their jaws just about dropped to the floor as they saw Harry being surrounded by torrents of magic.
The ceiling and the floor started to crack, and even the walls suffered some damage under the pressure of the magic. They all watched as the magic that surrounded him was starting to rise him into the air. A perfect sphere of pure magic could now be seen surrounding him. The very air seemed to tremble as they watched Harry hanging naked in the air for about a second or two. Then the magic seemed to wrap itself around him and they saw open his mouth in a silent scream. After that they were unable too see what was happening, as a solid sphere of light was formed around him.
For several minutes they stood there, his friends almost going crazy with worries and what ifs. Then suddenly a crack was heard and the sphere started to show cracks and tears. In a single burst the sphere that had surrounded Harry exploded into a million pieces. The pieces of the sphere looked like a rainbow coloured meteor shower, disappearing when they hit the floor. The light blinded everyone for a few seconds, but what they then saw when they saw made them gasp. Suspended in the air was a person but it didn't look anything like the Harry they knew.
First there was the long, gradient hair that went past the waist. It was unlike anything either Neville or Ron had ever seen . It seemed to be full of life and was literally radiating with an inner glow of its own. It was pitch black at the roots, which then slowly faded to fiery red at tips. The next thing they noticed was that a pair large wolf ears were where his ears should be. Not to mention the big and fluffy tail to protruding from the end of his spine. While he still had knobby knees and elbows, they remembered him to have when he was younger. Harry's new body was now quite cute in its own way. The ritual was supposed to turn Harry in to a twelve year old, but he looked to be about six. His body was petite and lithe, with lightly tanned olive skin and well-defined stomach with a cute belly button. While the stomach was muscled, it was not enough to see the abdominal muscles. He gotten well shaped, at least for someone his age current age, hips and upper thighs, ended by a adorable set of feet.
Ever so slowly Harry started to descend until he was lying on the cracked floor. Ron slowly approached him and reached out with his hand. Harry was still unconscious and didn't move an inch. As Neville sat down on the floor beside, still in shock at what he had seen, looking over Harry. There was no one blemish or scar visible on his entire body, that could prove that this was Harry. The lightning bolt shaped scar that had been present on his forehead was no more.
////////////////////////////////
TBC
////////// AN///////////
That's was the first rewrite of this story, so what do you think, any thoughts, ideas, comments are appreciated, so please review.
That's all for now thank you for reading.
Ryuuohjin
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