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Toil & Trouble
3 reviewsHarry Potter is aware of the wizarding world. The only problem is he grew up apart from it. When he explored the magical world, he found danger, wonder, and friendship.
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Second Fiddle
(#) alec_potter 2006-08-16
loved it ...brilliant...i have my fingers crossed for h/hr,anywys no interaction with nev,i thought tht would hve been upcoming.is nev snobbish???he did liv thru all the huge fan following stuff n all...And what is harry going to do about flint,wil be intresting to see.update soonAuthor's response
Thanks. There is chemistry between Har and Her but nothing definite. Har and Nev interaction? It'll happen. Action against Flint is still an ongoing idea.Second Fiddle
(#) Skoell 2006-08-16
great story soo far! can't rate, the good all gone already...
i hope harry kicks rons butt in the duel...rons a pureblood, no physical combat experience...
i really really hope the relationship-thing resolves itself in a harryhermione pairing...they just fit each other better than any one else...Author's response
Thanks. It's a duel anything can happen. There is chemistry between H/Hr but nothing definite.Second Fiddle
(#) BJH 2006-08-16
Very nicely done. I just read this story to date and I find it quite enjoyable. I really like the conflict between Harry and his parents and I hope you don't resolve it too simply. Personally I think James and Lily gave up the right to call themselves Harry's parents when then abandoned him. and to celebrate the birthday of the child you discard because he failed to meet your expectations is just sick. Afterall they have warded the house to protect themselves and the children they deemed worthy of keeping so the arguement that they sent harry away to protecthim is just rubbish.
The family in Surrey that was killed several chapters ago, was that the Dursleys?
Looking forward to your next update.
BJHAuthor's response
Thanks. The heart is harder to heal than the body. Mark Evans and his family. DEs figured they were Lily's relatives.Second Fiddle
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-08-16
Fantastic story so far. I was hoping to see Harry end up with someone other than Hermione or Ginny, but I was hoping to see him get into a fight with Ron, so I'll take what I can get.
Looking forward to the next chapter.Author's response
Thanks. Brainstorming a duel between Har and Ron right now.Second Fiddle
(#) Alatoic01 2006-09-04
I really like this story, really well done.
I like the changes you make in Harry, maybe he can show to the magical world that muggle tactics are better for fighting(after all we have a lots of conflicts) and Harry could convine both forms of combats better.
I also love the way Hermione is acting around Harry, she is interested but doesnt now it, If its possible to vote i will prefer a H/Hr relationship, after all they have more in common.
Any way I really hope to read next chapter soon.
Cheers.
MACAuthor's response
Thanks. Glad you like it. H/Hr ship is a WIP. I like to keep my options open. Not chapter...chapters. It's kinda four part series.Second Fiddle
(#) daratraznoff 2006-09-11
Great story keep writing.Author's response
Thanks. Just finalizing the next chapters.
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