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Pokemon: The Great War chapter 1
2 reviewsWelcome to the strange new world of pokemon like you never seen it before. The story line takes place about ten years before the first Pokemon War. Follow Cain and his brother Bastien as they striv...
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Pokemon: The Great War
(#) Zz89137zz 2015-12-08
Hey all, it's Zz89137zz here. Don't forget to comment and tell me whether or not you want me to continue the story. Thanks again for all your help.Pokemon: The Great War
(#) Leofrost 2015-12-11
Awesome so far dude! I'll admit, I'm not much of a Pokémon ran, but I always did like back story fanfics. The dialogue is good and believable, and you describe pretty well. Don't forget to start a new paragraph for every time someone else speaks. Keep up the good work!Author's response
Thank you Leofrost. I will make sure to remember that. If you have any other suggestions let me know and I will try to fix that as well.
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