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Moving Forward by Standing Still: Part II
Naruto is given a scroll containing the secrets of making women fall for him, a scroll he uses at first on the women around him but soon on the shinobi world as a whole, giving birth to the Ero-ninja
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Eroninja
(#) Incandescence 2016-01-10
This was really enjoyable to read, I don't normally enjoy the sex scenes too much tbh, not really my thing but I'm warming up to them more and more ;) But also as this recent story arc progresses I get that feeling of epicness, like the greater picture is unfolding because the stage is expanding, it's not just Konoha, or Konoha + 1 village it's most of the world and there's many groups coming into play. Feels awesome :DEroninja
(#) labeled5150 2016-01-13
i just want to say your an awesome writer and thank you for using ppl from my favoritie final fantasy game ff 8 i hope to see squall in this story but hopeful as an ally to naruto and maybe rinoa with squall or naruto but its all up to you again you rock and good luckEroninja
(#) King-of-the-Sky 2016-01-18
I like how when Naruto's lovers want him to halt adding more women for the moment he does so and doesn't act upset. He even questions the thought of adding a woman who has romantic feelings towards him. The fact that he set up a separate meeting place so that he can meet up with each lover individually to give them one on one attention/love is commendable as well. I mean who wants an all out orgy all the time?
Kukaku wanting to make her sisters jealous will eventually lead to her trying to get with Naruto won't it.Author's response
Thank you for the review.
I agree obviously that it is a good thing Naruto listens to his lovers. The simple reason being that it shows he feels he is in an equal relationship with them. He takes more loves because they allow him to as much as because he can. But, if they ask him to stop and he throws a hissfit or worse doesn't listen then it just shows him as being selfish, not to mention makes a mockery of my claiming he values and cherishes them.
As for Kukaku, I wouldn't say it leads to anything so much as to demonstrate that she is placing value in the wrong things. I feel that a person that is truly content doesn't care what other people think about them. Kukaku sees her sisters are content, and perhaps because she lacks in it her own tries to spread it to others. For example, I am less than content with how Naruto ended. I thought it was a slap in the face to people expecting the story to build to something. Characters were regressed or just forgiven to keep them around. Not to mention how it turned Naruto into a scumbag father and friend. I show that lack of contentment by stating my displeasure every chance I can. Thank you for the opportunity by the way. Kukaku can be said to be doing the same thing in a sense.Eroninja
(#) mistakennormal 2016-01-19
hey TheLemonSage is sage (naruko's sister) ever going to join naruto's growing family any time soon if so then would love to see the development in her character, and I would like to say that I look forward to seeing mira join the family
PS: I love the story keep up the great workAuthor's response
Well, I can't really answer that without spoiling anything. But she does appear in the next chapter although it isn't in a lemon.
Thank you for the review.Eroninja
(#) thegreatbubbaj 2016-04-30
Ah-ha, Suzume is the Binder breaker, and she is planning to use Moegi against Naruto in some manner. Perhaps just to confirm her suspicions, or for something more direct and nefarious. Assuming she is not thrown off by the temporary break on taking on new lovers...Eroninja
(#) Daniel2610994 2017-12-07
Lol naruto sure has a way to make women fall for him and pretty hard at that, like mira or toki or moegi from the ones that wish to be bound to him.
Anyway yoshino sure is amazing to discover all that she did with things that others thought useless so it will give naruto and his family a huge advantage against all their enemies, and its really sad that ay is such a bastard because he could have been a really great leader and take the opportunitty for peace for what it is instead of plotting only how to take advantage of it.
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