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Moving Forward by Standing Still: Part II
Naruto is given a scroll containing the secrets of making women fall for him, a scroll he uses at first on the women around him but soon on the shinobi world as a whole, giving birth to the Ero-ninja
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Eroninja
(#) Zweig 2016-01-03
Nice Chapter!
I really loved the scene with Yoshino and Ibiki. The way how Yoshino dissected the information was awesome. I do wonder if those new Heavenly Kings are the Toriko-version now. They certainly could fit from power-level.
Also, i have some PMs on fanfiction which i would hope you could answer.
P.S.
Happy New Year.Eroninja
(#) TheNiemand 2016-01-03
LOL Nice that the New years Chapter ended with a new year eves.
This was a good chapter and to be honest has to much thing at once go one to go at every one at all in one chapter so I focused on my things I like.
First of is moegie and that her plot has started to developed, and the reasoning from Narutos lovers regarding her. And still kurious as what Suzume is planing to do since she got suspicious of Naruto. Which still lets my question open as to who also has taken the trak of narutos doings.
I see that the Raikage is still sheming behind the scene to make his villages the upper one while at the same time trying to draft the others one. And that Yugito is also seeing how he stands to her is also interesting new plot you started
The Minor Daymo meeting. One A** is always ther to stop thing from working. A saying comes to my mind for this guy : It takes just one bastard to ruin everything. The gloryhole for Tokis 'entertainment' was suprising. Didnt this count as taking lovers when He fucked Harunas ass?
And who is the guy with the three wives? Better question when will you go further into is persona? He seems plot important
Yoshinos abilitys to conect things are just bafling, let me wonder how long you have taken to make this conection/net of criminal work place and if you have a notebook just so you can keep the eye on the sheme.
The last point is this benefit event which I liked because I wondered when Koreshige would make his presence known again. And Also the introducing of Miyas way to the Family
Well all in all the chapter was very plot development heavy and started to parth the way for two womans to join Naruto FamilyEroninja
(#) Vegito786 2016-01-03
this was a really good chapter, with several plot threads and a few revelations especially how Ay really sees Yugito which is understandable considering he's the Raikage but this is going to hurt his standing with Yigito and even Mabui. really looking forward to the next chapter and Mira's induction into the family.Eroninja
(#) Europefan01 2016-01-03
Hola mi amingo, como estas? Doing well I'll bet as usual since the year 2016 is officially started with all new events coming to us sooner than we think. Anyways, awesome chapter like always; in addition, Moegi want to feel closure to the Chosen One since her admiration towards him after the invasion. Speaking of which, it's good to see Naruto, Toka and Yakumo discuss their points of view regarding the Chuunin Exams, its activities and changes to make it more challenging than before. Afterall, leadership is all about character development building, learning how to see the bigger picture in everything life throws at you and support those under your command mentally, physically, emotionally and spiritually in a positive manner. Same goes to the Jounin exams as well. Moreover, I am proud to see Naruto weighted his options when it comes to Moegi and professionally comes with a solution after Kurenai talked to him about it. Good thing too.
On the serious note, Yoshino and Ibiki is on the right track dealing with the happenings all over the Elemental Nations while observing the clues regarding the Heavenly Kings, tablet, Cult and its ascension. However, they still need more evidence before coming up with conclusions to really see what the said Cult is trying to accomplish. Also, it's understandable that Ay is very protective of his people of Kumo, but unfortunately, he did not see the truth behind Konan's resurrection and redemption of Akatsuki while still see Yugito as a weapon really upsets her. V786 made a strong point about this issue, Ay is going to lose Yugito and Mabui's loyalty if he doesn't change his POV regarding the reality of things that already happened.
In conclusion, it's all good to see Mira finally open up, let go the past and enjoying herself to create her own future with the people she come to love as equals. In addition, Yuugao assemble her own ANBU squad with Komachi, Toka and Taji as her partners. Most importantly, Toki finally learned her lesson about love comes in all shapes, sizes and forms. All thanks to Anko and her prodding to make fully understand.
Like always, I have enjoyed this episode and I am looking forward to the conclusion of the Moving Forward Arc.
So keep up the excellent work and update soon hombre.
Until next time mi amingo.
Adios
P.S.: Happy New Year man, I hope your existence will continue to soar throughout your life. Therefore, the sixth year of the awesomely KICK ASS series officially begins with more action, adventure, excitement, romance, drama, tragedy, angst, comfort, good/light hearted comedy, sex and the whole enchilada! All in all, Naruto's reputation as the Hero of the Leaf is growing and spreading all over like a sun shines brightly to our lives.Eroninja
(#) kingjubi10 2016-01-03
Another great chapter man. I'm really impressed at your writing ability, you churn out 20k or more chapters every month, while I have trouble with a 5k one.
Also it's impressive that you use people from past chapters like Taji'so former best friend in this chapter as a possible way to introduce her as a enemy; since what you have said so far doesn't really portray her as an ally.
And the Four Kings, both the Cult one and the one I was is possibly making, simply amazing. While you mentioned in the story that Yoshino thinks it could possible Iwa feeding people Bijuu flesh, is it possible that it has to do with the Zero Tail creatures?
It's been awhile since Kabuto has shown up, while I don't like him, I want to see him in terms story again. And Naruto'so sister and the Rinnegan girl, haven't seen them in a few chapter. With so many characters it must be difficult to keep track of the story at times.
Um what else did I want to say? Oh yea, the competition that Naruto'so company is now experience, very realistic even if it sucks. They are going have to do something about that if they want to make the money for their goals. Maybe a little assassination, wink wink.
I don't like the sound of that huge bald Inuzuka, can remember his name. I agree with Yugao it sounds like he has plans that extended from outside his clan. You should take him out too, lol.Eroninja
(#) HunterEternal 2016-01-03
So what did we learn this chapter? 1: Don't mess with Anko. 2: Anko is an evil pervert genius. 3: Seriously, do not fuck with Anko. But perverted snakes aside I loved this chapter. I can't wait to see where some of these plots lead. Moegi, Mira, Haruna, and Toki joining should be good. I feel sorry for Toka having to work with those two dorks. But I feel really sorry for Yugito. That really sucks for her. But I'm most curious about Yugao. I want to see where that dark part of her leads. That and more of her sexy squad. Can't wait for the next chapter. Happy new year.Eroninja
(#) Dragoon740 2016-01-03
Okay, I was able to figure out that the Stone President is from Final fantasy 8, but where is Oboro from?
Great chapter by the way.Eroninja
(#) helel0 2016-01-03
Awesome chapter.
Several nice lemon scenes.
Naruto being nervous around Moegi is an interesting and amusing idea.
Looking forward to how you develop the Raikage and his tyrannical attitude and how th Kumo-nin react to it.
Nice to see Edea make an appearance; I wonder if she's being controlled as in the game FFVIII or if she'll just be another villain.
Enjoyed Yoshino earning her name with Ibiki.
Hope Haruna and Toki will join soon after the ban is lifted.
The end of the year charity was nice and entertaining.
As always looking forward to the next chapter.Eroninja
(#) NarutoKushina 2016-01-04
Another great chapter, a lot going on in the it. The meeting between the minor villages was nice. It shows just how much more work the family and allies need to do. It has brought in some more bastards, but they seem to be just minor players though. Still possible threats though.
Looks like the women of Kumo apart of the family are going to have their views of the Raikage hurt a lot after that meeting. I understand his wanting to put his village first, but he is very short sighted in a lot of ways as well. Those views will hurt his village more than help it. It might take something big for him to fully make a turn for the better. Ay is a little confusing right now though. He came off as a real bastard in this chapter, and in previous ones not as much.
Loved the scene with Yoshino and Ibiki, It has brought up a lot of good things. I like her attention to detail, and not over looking the small things.
Soon Mira, Haruna, and Toki will be joining the family fully. I liked the small scene between Mira and Naruto, she has grown quite a bit since the attack and her talk with him.
Toki finding out she is a voyeur if funny, she just has to sit down and really think a bit more and she will end up where she wants to be in her heart. Haruna is almost there as well. Loved the whole teasing thing in this chapter.
Seems the bald bastard has yet to learn his place, and he may just end up needing to be put down like a rabid dog he is.
I am starting to wonder if Suzume is a part of the cult. She seemed eager when she learned the Moegi was going to be on Naruto's team since and is seems to be trying to get Moegi in Naruto's bed. Before learning that she did not seem all that interested in Moegi.
Sucks how much the competition seems to be hurting the shipping company right now. I do wonder just how they will turn it around. They are facing a lot of corruption known and unknown.
They have eliminated a few threats like Danzo and his Root, and Joseki and his version. But they have so many more that they need to deal with, and some have only been minor so far. Things will soon really pick up the next arc. Hopefully they make it through all in tact. I do see some pain for the family coming soon though.
Still though I look forward to Moegi, Toki, Haruna, and Mira joining the family. Moegi is the only one of them not aware of it right now. I am still looking forward to Sage joining as well.Eroninja
(#) LeafRanger5 2016-01-04
I'll admit, I feel it's presumptious of naruto's girls to first practically encourage him to nail as many women as they think will either help him, or make him happy, but now are are telling him to stop, even if it's temporary.
What's more, this isn't feeling like an actual relationship when he's just following their orders like that. I know you've covered this in the past, but regarding this whole situation, it does feel like naruto's sort of being a door mat to them.
Otherwise, was an interesting chapter, and please keep up the good work.
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