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Points of Authority 5

by vaiwandil 2 reviews

you knew something like this had to happen ...

Category: Delilah and Julius - Rating: G - Genres: Action/Adventure - Published: 2006-08-29 - Updated: 2006-08-29 - 630 words

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hybrid theory

(#) Trinda 2006-08-29

Ummm, I think you need to re look at your chapter. I think you missed a section after Delilah said she was an idiot o.o
Author's response
hm... I did that 'cut' on purpose (as nothing really happens between her following Julius and meeting Al) but reading it again it does look a but unharmonious... I'll see what I can do about this.
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(#) darks00 2006-08-29

aww no more updates for a while? Darn. Well, good chapter! Plz update soon!

xxDarkness' Kidxx

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