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thresea writes to her dad only she gets more than an answer she finds her self deep into trouble in many diffrent ways
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friends and family
(#) NuuoaEclaire 2006-07-19
It's good but don't forget to put capitals.Author's response
thanks i was in a real rush so i never had time to edit it wellfriends and family
(#) crazyeightpianogal 2006-08-13
Awww...
It sounds like's you plucked thoughts straight from Theresa's head. If I must criticize constructively, I suppose I'd recommend a grammar check. Other than that, keep up the good work!friends and family
(#) OceanAnge-Babe 2006-09-05
Yeah, Great start to your story. Keep up the good work! ^^
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