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Categories > Cartoons > Class of the Titans > friends and family

thresea writes to her dad only she gets more than an answer she finds her self deep into trouble in many diffrent ways

Category: Class of the Titans - Rating: G - Genres: Drama - Warnings: [V] - Published: 2006-07-19 - Updated: 2006-07-19 - 542 words

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friends and family

(#) NuuoaEclaire 2006-07-19

It's good but don't forget to put capitals.
Author's response
thanks i was in a real rush so i never had time to edit it well
friends and family

(#) crazyeightpianogal 2006-08-13

Awww...
It sounds like's you plucked thoughts straight from Theresa's head. If I must criticize constructively, I suppose I'd recommend a grammar check. Other than that, keep up the good work!
friends and family

(#) Rossetta 2006-09-01

It could have been longer but it was good
friends and family

(#) OceanAnge-Babe 2006-09-05

Yeah, Great start to your story. Keep up the good work! ^^