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Dueling Class
3 reviewsHarry is aware of the wizarding world. The only problem is he grew up apart from it. When he explored the magical world, he found danger, wonder, and friendship.
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Second Fiddle
(#) alec_potter 2006-09-14
awesom chapter...loved the duels...harry beating them magically was a bit unrealistic...but the way he combined the two was too good...and the spl effects you have put in...the mist and all was good too.i think nev would hve been a bit arrogant and all, but i do hope that harry-nev develop friendship soon.
And the way h/hr relation is going...great..loved that part too.Hope to see some more stuff on that.
the yellow eyes i am guessing is due to the wolf factor.
what is the prophecy in the universe...that will be intresting...who will beat voldy??Author's response
Thanks. Harry hasn't fully immersed himself in the magical world to think like a wizard. Mrs. Longbottom's influence on Nev is significant. Har/Nev friendship? It could happen. H/Hr relationship? WIP. The wolf has something to do with his eyes. In the prophecy of this verse, cut Harry's name, paste Nev.Second Fiddle
(#) Alatoic01 2006-09-14
Good chapter, the dueling was really well done, Harry use the weakness in Ron and Neville to win and was fast of mind to defeat the trap of Neville.
Just a thing, were did Harry learn invisibility and silent casting?
Cheers
MACAuthor's response
Thanks. Glad you like the duel. You can read it back at Magical Lessons.
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