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Harry Potter, the Archmage
(#) Skoell 2006-09-26
this story is very exciting and original! nice chapter!
BUT how did malfoy know that harry was in that compartment??? o_0
nobody knows how he looks like! sooo how's that possible?? even at the sorting it was HYDRA evans??? i thought "hydra" was a nickname? shouldn't it have been harry evans?
harry should be either in ravenclaw or slytherin, they would both fit his personality in this story...
BUT i would recommend slytherin! ambitous and cunning, resourceful and not short about using a threat against the hat...and if he's in slytherin, you could split the house in 2 fractions -the death eater children with malfoy (animosity started in train) and neutral families and harry-, ron's already annoying soo it would be easy to continue this in a very close-minded gryffindor manner...
will you put hermione in gryff?? i would do it because it's her courage of a logical person to enter a world of magic...
they didn't have much contact yet, but her in gryff and him in slyth would be also a good possibility for a strong friendship above houses...maybe in later years something more... (hp/hg-shipper: hint, hint) =PHarry Potter, the Archmage
(#) zaxxon 2006-09-26
Depend on the reason: to break traditional view of the houses, either Hufflepuff or Slytherin. Would see a lot of DnD fans from Hufflepuff, as well as avoid the sterotypical "slytherin==evil" and avoid being in Snape and Malfoy's house. Of course, I feel the Hogwarts Houses have been corrupted like the Ministry. I like to see the Hufflepuff mascot as a Hellhound, Slytherin as a Dragon, Ravenclaw as a phoenix, and Gryffindore as an actual gryffin.
Ravenclaw would work too.
But Hufflepuff would be more interesting.Harry Potter, the Archmage
(#) BenRG 2006-09-27
Okay - positives first. I like the idea of the RPG vision of magic being applicable in Harry's magical world, giving him a completely unique perspective on the art. That is one reason why I like the original 'ArchMagus' on FF.net.
The negatives... Are a few too many for me. A 11-year-old with guns? Oh dear. Not enough discussion of magic and how Harry learns to use it. Paper thin characterisation and an OC who really fails to have any useful function at all. And that nickname... Ugh.
This is a valiant attempt on your part, but I prefer the original. Please keep going, as it may yet find its feet but try not to make Harry a gun-weilding assassin too early.
BenRG's Rating: 5/10Harry Potter, the Archmage
(#) Drash 2006-09-27
I say put Hydra in Ravenclaw because of the trident increasing his probably high int. stats
lol
but seriously Ravenclaw I sayHarry Potter, the Archmage
(#) jabarber69 2006-10-13
Hey great story and so well written! I simply loved the plot so believable his going to his uncle david and finding out ax can do wandless magic, cool! I sincerily hope you can keep this going, cause I will definitely be checking back!Harry Potter, the Archmage
(#) anonymous_individual 2006-11-11
coool story
and i agree with u gryffindor is totally over rated.
ummm..yeh oh and plz update asapHarry Potter, the Archmage
(#) anonymous_individual 2006-11-11
coool story
and i agree with u gryffindor is totally over rated.
ummm..yeh oh and plz update asapHarry Potter, the Archmage
(#) OlorinBlack 2010-09-12
RAVENCLAW!
Hehehe. Can't wait until the next part!Harry Potter, the Archmage
(#) felixharry 2015-03-19
Dude, your story is awesome! Please update soon.
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