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The material emo songs are made of
6 reviewsThis chapter will render you in a state of complete surprise when you find out that Patrick appears to be a bit shy around the fair sex. *gasps*
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The Bass Files
(#) FruitBat 2006-09-30
Before you start correcting other people's spelling, perhaps you should learn proper punctuation.
"This story is very boring," I said.
Not -
"This story is very boring.", I said.Author's response
Sorry, that´s how we write it in my mothertongue which is not English. However, thanks for the info. I will see what I can do.The Bass Files
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-10-17
your sarcasm is laugh out loud funny. i’m not trying to sound like ebert or anything, but wow. I honestly laughed. out loud. well, it was more like a chuckle, but that doesn't sound as great as laugh.Author's response
I think the only sarcasm that makes me actually really laugh out loud is on Daria and some Simpsons episodes. That´s hard competition so I´m definitely happy about every little chuckle that mine causes. Glad to be able to keep you entertained. (Speaking of which, too bad there´s only one set of Pete nude pics, huh?)The Bass Files
(#) patrickdance4me 2006-11-10
i love how you describe patrick in the last paragraph of this chapter. it made me laugh so hard :]Author's response
Thank you. This story is full of picking on Patrick. ;) Thank you for bothering to read this from the very beginning. This has grown into a very long story so that´s very awesome of you! :) I hope you find the other chapters entertaining as well. If not, please complain. ;)The Bass Files
(#) isuckatlifen 2006-12-16
thx 2 u my lip is bleeding cause i cant laugh out loud so i had to bite my lip and now i bit it so hard its bleeding i think a few inches taller that an oompa loompa is petes height patricks more like a few inches shorter than a leprichanAuthor's response
Sorry about your lip. :I Have some plonk? (Are you old enough to drink alcohol yet? Nevermind, I'm not your mom... ;) )
Ha, that's a good point.
Wow, are you gonna read all of this piece of junk? Well, I think you're awesome. :) Thanks for bothering. You definitely don't suck at giving reviews!The Bass Files
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-02-12
So here I am, still reviewing a story that is already completed. I am a loser.
There were so many things in this chapter that made me laugh out loud! Seriously: "I blushed. To distract myself I looked out the window. Then I glanced in the rear view mirror again and caught Patrick´s eyes looking at me. He blushed too. Now, if this wasn´t the official dorks-mobile, I don´t know." I could really see this happening. And I love dorks, so protraying the characters in this way makes me love all of them even more!
Okay, I'm going to go read some more now...
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