(#) Adaku-chan 2006-10-14Wow!! I've been reading alot of vampire fictions on here. oh well, it's still cool. I lvoe this story, as much as the others I've read so far. Not bad. I'm going to read the next chapter. Till next time
Author's responseHey! Thank you so much for reading my story. Please keep reading!
(#) MadIsMyName 2006-10-16Nice! I liked it. Your exposition was well done and wonderfully coherent, but you may have stated the fact that Lucinda has black hair one too many times. Just a little note there. You also used 'there' instead of 'they' once, but that's easily fixable. Again, your description is very nice, and I can picture the characters perfectly! Well done!
Author's responseThank you very much. Yes, now that I read it, It does seem like I'm attempting to drill the fact that Lucinda-has-black-hair into you're heads, yes? I'll try and avoid that in the future.
Well, a new chapter will be up hopefully by the end of the week. I just need to erm... finish writing it and then proof read.
Well, thank you very very much for you're kind support and I hope that I hear more from you soon.
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