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• White Rose

  (#) walkingbilboard 2006-10-10

  I think I'm gonna cry!! :( :(
  That was so0o0o00o0o0o00o sweet!
  Peace, Love and Boomerangs--AlleyCat

• White Rose

  (#) darks00 2006-10-10

  Again, I have to be honest...not your best work. It was fast, and got to the point which usually doesn't seem to be yours style...but it's still good. It's always good to try to do something different. Be bold and take a chance. :)
  
  I hope you continue to make more stories.
  
  xxDarkness' Kidxx

• White Rose

  (#) vaiwandil 2006-10-11

  I really enjoyed reading it - mind you, enjoy is perhaps not the right word.
  This is a really orignal idea but I personally couldn't write in class... luckily you can!

• White Rose

  (#) Trinda 2006-10-13

  That was so sweet and sad. I liked it, it was very different but I think you captured all of Julius's feelings exactly. In my opinion anyways.
  
  I like the part where he's like "That's my biggest regret. The tombstone should read Delilah Chevalier, but I was too scared to ask her. I'm sure she would have said yes. A single tear rolls down my cheek and hits the white stone. I sigh. I'm 48, and I'll get older, but Delilah will forever be 23. The 25 year gap will grow bigger with each passing year."
  
  That's the best part of the story in my opinion. Loved it. Write more. :D

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