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Haunting Fairytale
7 reviewsSoft lighting of pale red gently cascaded down the side of the woman's face, her hair looked luscious and angelic, but her face was out of place. She wore a sad, sad face of heart wrenching lonelin...
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Awake in a Dream
(#) princessofoyownworld 2006-10-10
First to review on a new chappie. First to say it rocked. Update soon.Awake in a Dream
(#) Pheonee 2006-10-10
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Um...so. It was of awesomeness. Enytime you want the beta-ing done, just say the word. ^^ Yayness.
Can I stress how good this is? I don't think so. It's that good. Urg, you don't need my beta! I can't do more than check for accidental errors. But do tell me anyway :D
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Thank you!
AWESOMENESS! OK! I feel hyper because of the not-pointless review.Awake in a Dream
(#) story_master 2006-10-11
awsome chapter! i can't wait for the next one. The a/a kiss was cute although a little awkward, but still one of my fav parts of your story. Keep up the awsome work!Author's response
Thanks. I'll do my best to update. And it was rather awkward.Awake in a Dream
(#) iheartyou07 2006-10-11
this was an amazing chapter, great work on it! Loved it, Atlanta and Archie's first kiss was rather awkward, but that's expected in their situation. Great chapter/story, UPDATE SOON!!!!!Author's response
Thank you, I'm quite proud of it aswell. And yes it was rather awkward, that was the intention. Like she wanted the pain to go away so the kiss wasn't real.Awake in a Dream
(#) lovely_ 2006-10-11
IT was good but i'm alittle comfused does she or does she not like archie?Author's response
Just a quick question. Have you read all the chapters? YOu need to draw your own conclusions. She is just really, really confused and feels she can't like/love anyone because of what happened to Theresa.
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