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A Phoenix and a Pharoah
(#) Isia 2006-10-12
Gah! Well writen story, BUT ISIS IS A FREAKEN POWERFUL GODDESS! DID YOU DO ANY REASHERCH WHAT SO EVER ON THE TOPIC! HORUS IS THE GOD OF PHAROHS, HE WOULD BE HELPING NEIL! MOJO AND HOJO ARE NOT EGYPTION NAMES! AND THERE IS NO SUCH THING AS: SPARX, ISIS' CASTLE IN THE SKY, RA LIVES IN A WING OF OF THE HALL OF GUGMENT, HARD TO GET TO! THERE ARE MORE MISTAKS! Other than that, this rocks!Author's response
I'm not the person who wrote the story but she's my best friend and I know storys don't have to picture perfect, so what if she changed some of the info. does it matter? Mojo and Kojo are just funny random names along with Sparks. And Ra was kicked out of the Hall of Judgment in this story and Horus has not come in to this story yet.
A Phoenix and a Pharoah
(#) greektitan 2006-10-12
I wanted to tell you something but i kept forgetting thats not how you spell the god of time and space's name its spelt CRONUS!Anyways great story!Author's response
Okay, thx for the advise:)
Thanks for your review^^
And keep on smiling^.^
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