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Two Harrys
When would be one of the worst points in time for an over-powered Harry to return to his past? During the Trial before the Wizengamot! Time-traveling Harry reworks Year 5. Harry/Hermione/Luna/Padma
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Re-Ordered
(#) Nightwing509 2006-10-21
I liked the way you had Harry tell everyone off. And start to take control of his life.Re-Ordered
(#) sadfru 2006-10-21
great start and really looking forward to how the his friends react to this 'situation'Re-Ordered
(#) jabarber69 2006-10-22
Hey this is a rather cool and very intriging story. your note said something about you wouldnt update until triwizard redux something? all I can say is I hope you update soon, cause I really want to see more of this especially the sex scenes with hermione and luna!Re-Ordered
(#) matthiasblack 2006-10-22
I like this so far and would like to see more if possible. I will also check out your Triwizard Redux and hope it is as good as your other stories. Good luck with the fic.Re-Ordered
(#) foolishwandwaver 2006-10-22
Loved the spell that 'listens in'. And story that has a kick-ass Harry is good with me, especially if written well. Your story is all that and more.
Actually, I don't believe I've yet to read a bad story by you.Author's response
Thanks. Glad you liked the evesdropping spell, adapted from the idea of a transcription spell.
"T"Re-Ordered
(#) brad 2006-10-23
Merc said:
"Oooh come back from the future, now suddenly stronger than everyone else in the room."
Not quite, Merc - Harry is stronger than everyone else in the room ... COMBINED. Heh.
Yes, you've really got a super-powerful Harry in this one. One day you must consider writing a parody of these types of stories.
As you may recall I've always had a soft spot for a 'Harry in Azkaban' story ... or more precisely, a 'Harry against the world' story where only Hermione comes to his aid and believes in him. Okay, this tale doesn't seem to be it - Harry's so powerful there'd be no tension in his conflict against the magical authorities and Dumbledore - but I still see something in common with this:
"... we could set every adult you know, including Dumbledore, against us, along with Ron and Ginny, and maybe even Hermione"
I'll be curious to see what you do along those lines. In all of your stories I don't think you've had Harry on the outers with everyone; even Ron has usually come good after a while, and I think the other four have always been with him.
I'll have to wait and see what transpires!Author's response
No, I've decided not to the Azkaban story, I write in enough cliched forms as it is! this story will be more detailed than 'Triwizard Redux', which is a more informal look.
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