I want your breath to stop when you reach the end of this chapter.
It makes me shiver with excitment.
holyyyyy travi you're at it again.
I dunno what to say. Ive used all my good lines already.
ily ily ily.
oh and more ily.
Erm, Excuse me?
I WAS THE PHYSIC!!!
And you're finally going deeper into the storyyyyyyyyyy.
That last part was very very very moving. As quoth ficwad... 'It made me want to move to the himylayas and contemplate my life.' Uses rating point Yay!
Trick's pregnant isn't he?
this is supersupersupergood. :]
aw poor patrick is sick. :[ i feel for him. i feel like shit right now.
Ooh. I have to say, love you and your stories.
Annnnd if you are going to have Pete find a gril.. I'm available. Heh.
You+Me+Pot roast+ some candle light+ Patrick singing "Let's get it on"
YOU change that world Evie!
evie is such a badass, why wouldn't she just beat him up herself? because i played that scene out in my head, and i almost pictured her punching him in the mouth. it was good.
Damn, you got some deep thinking going on.
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